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4fil 11-19-04 12:01 AM

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Implicit 11-19-04 12:52 AM

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Implicit 11-19-04 08:45 PM

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Implicit 11-20-04 12:19 AM

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4fil 11-20-04 03:07 AM

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Implicit 11-20-04 04:32 AM

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Mad Dog 11-20-04 06:39 AM

Voted For: kon-vex

Sabotage

Im skilled in this game u just a poor rookie
They say you are what you eat..no wonder you devour pussy
^ Already seen a you are what you eat bar today

Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club
Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub*
^ punch weak really nothing special in it

Periodically line after line
Kon’s gonna beat me? Naw, its all in your mind**
^ blah

Im beating u forever like they sayin that times broke
The only time youre ever up is when youre waiting on votes
^ 2nd line aight but 1st line self-glory

I got ho’s cause kid I jus pop and go
Kon’s seen more de-feats than Dr.Scholls
^ Defeat lines are played and again self-glory 1st line

Ur flow is only sprinkling mine stays thundering
What more do I have to do? Youre already under me
^ self-glory closer but if worded different...woulda been dope punch

Kon-vex

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
^ weak rhyme but aight opener

He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
^ ??? that could be a glorification bar to him...no real diss there

He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
^ lol good bar there nice punch

“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
^ LOL however a lil self-g but that made me laugh

Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
^ nice punch...but it don't rhyme

Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
^ Personal needs backing up but good bar

Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
^ Aight closer again coulda been better

Overall

Average battle but had some aight punches no real complex wordplay that stood out but not a wack battle...however it was 1 sided Sabotage u do need to elevate more try and stay off the self-glory track and work on ya flow and structure some more...Kon-vex nice verse 1 bar had no rhyme and the other had a weak rhyme but other than that it was an aight verse dope flow and deent structure...keep em comin

V/Kon-vex RTF in ma sig

Implicit 11-20-04 05:43 PM

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4fil 11-20-04 07:46 PM

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4fil 11-23-04 11:23 PM

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