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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

ok structure definately u string work on ur structure buckaroo
flow string by a little not ver much though
complexity definately lyrical string had i think the most basic verse ive ever seen on this site ever and thats just sad lol
punches lyrical strings were played corny lines ud at least think hed use some tight played ones lol u also had better personals good try from both but string u were short by a few miles

i wish people would stop hatin on my structure cot damn. uppin for votes

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Voted For: String9487

hahahah i liked this hsyt man i liked ur punches better shyts good man nice flow decent vocab and structure for a battle diss i like it mann keep uppin for more votes
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

This Was an Ok Battle I MEan It was kinda Hard to Vote on bcuz Lyrical Started Strong Then Went weak Then bac to strong The string I Was like Lyrical Said his stuff is confusin i had To read it Twice to see wat He was tryin To Get Thru But N E way to Me lyrical Got This Battle
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This Was an Ok Battle I MEan It was kinda Hard to Vote on bcuz Lyrical Started Strong Then Went weak Then bac to strong The string I Was like Lyrical Said his stuff is confusin i had To read it Twice to see wat He was tryin To Get Thru But N E way to Me lyrical Got This Battle
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ur explanation made no sense at all??? learn how to type coherently son.

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