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distilled 11-28-04 08:26 PM

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Own This

distilled 11-29-04 01:26 PM

Please God Vote.

I

Am

Uppin

NAMSAYIN

I OWN THIS GUY

DrasticMeasureZ 11-29-04 04:08 PM

This was feedback posted for ...Xclusive...
 
You make less sense than chinese cartoon's dummy,
I mean we'r still all awaiting this 'Audio soon, coming'
I say awaiting, the word I'm looking for is dreading,
Who wants to here a 14 yr old, attempting story telling,
Especially a Faggot that wears pink at parties to be cool,
I look at Mike Hawk's sig, shit get's me rollin every time dude,
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS NICE



To be honest you can't type, So how you gonna battle??
Even your family hates you 'No pics of X up on the mantle'
Serious man, you'v got a face even a mother would hate,
Your like 'I'll be as good as you in 3 years when I elevate!!'
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW


OVERALL= YA VERSE WAS GOOD NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW......DECENT PUNCHES EITHER WAY DIS WAS AN GOOD VERSE NICE (THUMBS UP)

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT GOOD PUNCHES GOOD FLOW



Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^^^^^^^^^ EH THAT CLOSA WAS KINDA WEAK FAM


OVERALL= OK VERSE UNTIL THE CLOSA JUST PUT IT DOWN THE DRAIN......U HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES ON THA 1ST PART...U SHOULD KEPT THAT GOING....BUT DEN U ENDED WACKNESS ON THA CLOSA



IN MY OPINION I THINK DISTILLED GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW.......THA PERSONALS & PUNCHES TOOKED OVA


XCLUSIVE- U HAD AN GOOD START BUT AT THE END U JUST FUCKED IT UP.......PUNCHES WERE GOOD FROM THE BEGINNING...BUT AT THE END OF THE CLOSA U JUST CAME NOT HARD.......

SO I GIVE DIS TO DISTILLED

4fil 11-29-04 04:32 PM

Voted For: distilled

Distilled lets see if u can “represent” that name and stop time…
By “defending” your mom trying to get on me like a jiggly lime…
^^^^NO.......... weak intro
How are you gonna be good at “audio” coming from the U.K…
Tempting to “sound” awful like a English men with tooth decay…
^^^^^NO........ yo xclusive.... this shit your doiing.... like... "audio" then "sound"..... you think thats word play... it aint... its wack and it sucks.... dont do it
I cant believe you asked elephants if your raps were so “tricked-out”…
Then got “played” by animals with “dead” brains & now ur forgot about...
^^^^no.... not really....
Im sry you don’t have to mention you like “cross-dressers” that’s ok…
Its iight you reach for ur 1 dollar on top the “table-dresser” to pay…
^^^^NOPE.......
Im so sry English people are not a “force” of anything in crew fights…
You “push” & try to “squeeze” fat ones alot when u dont have the rights…
^^^no.... weak closer....
overall xclusive... weak verse...... that shit you have like your last line with the.... "force" "push" Squeeze" is just weak as wordplay..... nuff said

distilled you wins this man.... good verse...
xclsive..... think about the feedback i gave you and change your shit man it just aint connecting..... vote distilled
you distilled... can you return the favour and drop a vote on the battle in the sig aint.... im dying to get it closed... thx

Acuity 11-29-04 04:47 PM

Voted For: distilled

HOLLLLLAAAA 2x4 got merked

Vote: distilled

Opening: distilled - heavy
Endin: distilled
Lyrics: 2x4
Wordplay: 2x4
Punches: distilled
Originality: distilled -------family pics n shit
Personaks: distilled - sig diss, audio diss, photo diss --- didnt c many from 2x4 cept 4 played out UK angle
Structure: tied
Flow: distilled

2x4: 7/10
distilled : 8.5/10


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