Voted For: kon-vex

1st of all...only newbs put explainations to their punches, headgames, please avoid doing that unless you really have to, cause, if your punches are really that good, you dont need explainations.

Tryin to get fame by battlin the game, damn shame...
Name: konvex, cuz skill wise, we all out of his 'range!'*
^^^decent opener
Smoke this bitch like grass, he won't last, his lyrics are ass...
He's original? hardly...had to bite his fuckin name from math!**
^^^ehh.....noone will know that, most people when they think convex,they're talking bout lenses, I'm pretty sure this kid did too, anyways...decent punch
Like JFK, I deliver lyrical assination, this bitch gonna be dead
Like this bitches fuckin sig says...
...It's all in the head!***
^^^no punch whatsoever in this bar...refrain from using swear words...that gives out stereotype of increativity
You tried for the council, i'm the reason you aint in the crew
He's dope? nope, just uses superior methods to kon you! **
^^^nice personal
Think your immortal, well yeah, at being wack by far...
Hit this bitch hard n' leave him mo' spun then his avatar!*
^^^weak closer

His raps are partially misplaced, like his teeth needing braces
talked to the kids dentist, the guy said he found sperm traces
^^^^aight opener
I think headgames is a magician, cause his minds playing tricks
How you gon’ be straight spitting with all that sucking on dicks
^^^funny punch here
I will Electrify you, Then you’ll be jumping around with static
I would say that he’s lost his flow, now he can only sit in traffic
^^^lol
His verse was pretty hypnotic, cause the crowd is in a slumber
He’s got four loses already, guess what.. five is my lucky number
^^^weak...
His lyrics are obviosly bitten, cause they are all currently in use
Ill would punch this bitch hard, but i'd get convicted of child abuse
^^^nice closer

overall I think konvex gets this....for harder hitting punches, better structure while headgames's structure was bit shaky

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Voted For: kon-vex

wattta wack thing man.......... but kon ate this kat......had gud flow punches were pretty will Electrify you, Then you’ll be jumping around with static
I would say that he’s lost his flow, now he can only sit in traffic
His verse was pretty hypnoticgud but really krap personals lacked that............... only gud line .allll othas wew krap...........

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Voted For: headgames

wow, im impressed nice battle from both sides of the feild..
now headgames...STOP with the longass explanation< not needed son..i liked the personal"bite from math"..lil overboard on asonasnce rhymin, there not multi's..lol..
good battle
kon-ex, closer was funny, but to many filler lines..not hard hittin overall,your elevatin though, keep it up...
youve gotten much better from what i remember...
headgames had better punches though...
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now both of you return the favour...or ill ground ya both....!!
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Thnx one man band.... blah I know multi's were wack.... i'm just practicing them... trying to develop new styles...... uppin this

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