Voted For: Inception

this was omse what of a wack battle both of you need to work on strucure you both ahd similer styles but i give this to you becuase you had better multies, both need to work on wordplay alot aswell as metaphores

all of the punches where very weak...just eleavte///

Voted For: Inception

Jay-SmileZ:

Man you lost me at the first sentence, number one, you wRotE iT lIkE tHiS and number to, man you were all over the place, your flow wasn't real soild, I wasn't really diggin that man.

Inception:

"only tyme you nice on tha block is helpin old ladies across tha street"

that shyt was tight man, I laughed at that.

You had it pretty solid, but some of your verses were getting long at some points, it was coo, but I wasn't really diggin that.

Overall you both did good, but theres always room for improvement.