Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

NH wins this because he actually had punches...

RAMBO...that was a self glorification verse...u cant do that in a battle...battles are about punches...and taking shots at the other guy...

NH...nice overall verse...ur wordplay was ok...and ur punches hit nicely...work on flow and rhyme scheme...

plz return the favor wit an honest vote\/...

Voted For: Rambo

I think that rambo had a better verse overal because he used personals, and had a better flow and better structure

Neptune you tried to pack to much into one verse hoppin all over the place and your punches were a little out of context and stretching... the packin green had nothing to do with battling this guy and niether did you flowing with art..

try to come wit a battle rap not a song verse

Uppin....plz somebody just vote on this...

Voted For: Rambo

Rambo got this.. you faggots dickride.

Neptune's structure was garbage.. and his punches and concepts were fucking wack.

v/ Rambo

easy.

Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

aight breakdown:
Rambo
i wasn't feelin your first half of your verse, it wasn't hot.. this bar wasn't too bad tho:
Neptune is a planet and you cant be a scurry mayne/
Cause i had a impact on florida you aint no hurrycane//

also some of your lines didn't even rhyme.. you had some aight punches..

NeptuneHurricane
your opener was hot-
I Pack more Green than the Packers, my rhymes so cold you can call em lambo/*
This pussy Rambo is a hoe, he thinks his rhymes are bright stars but dont glow/

the second bar was pretty decent as well-
Let him know, cuz this battles all for show/
When you rap, it's like a time bomb, cuz sooner or later you'll realize:
You blow/

your verse seems as tho you spit audio tracks the way it flows smoothly.. you write the way you prolly spit.. but for this battle, that was not the right route to go.. the lines wit automatic, fanatic, and vatican were unnecessary.. however you had a nice finisher to end the battle.. you came harder and was consistent overall so i give the win to you.