This was feedback posted for Marshall Law
 

checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk thisssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

don't give gay feedback just vote i only need one more

vote.............................................. ........

Sorry, I don't do rap music... I play drums in a rock band. Regaurdless I am still making real music, that people can hear- not read.

Anyway, Lol@ deleting all of my votes. This site can fuck off, cause you're all too busy running around sucking each others cocks for votes, and not even doing it discretly.

come on ya'll vote it up i need on more is it that hard?

^ Whose dick did you suck to have my votes deleted.

Voted For: A.K.A.

Watch me slit his throat while this idiot waits and flosses,
Cause someone once told me I needed to cut my losses.
Tired of talk- so I'm bringing the hammer to nail this whiz
... So he's got me killing in the name; of all his aliases.
Told him he was spoiled, and he started to look down south,
Making my dick the smartest thing to come out of his mouth.
Don't front with me, cause I know you're really not tough,
...Hell you're so god damn poor- I can't even call your bluff.
So when I flip scripts, you'll never catch my mentallity...
Trying to grab my concepts, when you can't grasp reality.
^^^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT, GOOD FLOW, OK PUNCHES SOME WERE PLAYED, SOME WERE GOOD, I LIKED THE WAY U USE PERSONALS (TALKED ABOUT HIS ALISAS)
KEEP IT UP FAM



your rhymes is like your name i'ma break them
just cause you got his name don't mean you as good as em
I'ma take the tag off your shirt and put it on your toe
bullets kinda like your ma with the way they blow
you better watch cause i'm not the one you wanna hurt
but try and you'll be sleeping wit a blacket made of dirt
you can't rap so i say fuck u and your old alias too
i rap a bandana around my fist so all you see is blue
i got a butcher knife that will slit your wrist
big hole so u gonna cover it wit more then a bracelet
^^ GOOD FLOW^^ DIDNT SENSE ANY PERSONALS ^^ PUNCHES WERE KINDA HARD BUT IT WAS AIIIGHT


BOTH OF YOU NEEDS TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES....FLOW GOOD FROM BOTH SIDES,,,PERSONALS,,,,,GOOD FROM BOTH SIDES....DIS WASNT AN GOOD BATTLE,,,BUT I GOTS TO VOTE WHO HAD NON-MOST PLAYED OUT PUNCHES AND THAT IS AKA HIS PUNCHES WERE KINDA HARD AND YOUR PUNCHES LAW WAS KINDA PLAYED OUT

BOTH OF YOU ELEVATE ON PUNCHES WERD

This was feedback posted for Marshall Law
 

checking votes....................................

ok voting this back up 2 more left......................

Voted For: A.K.A.

Marshall Law
decent punches, nice structure
vocab was good, flow was aight
didn't see no wp from you, overall
ur drop wasn't good..yo punches didnt
make no sense..especially the 2nd line...

A.K.A.
decent drop, punches were hard-hittin
structure was blah, flow was aight..and
ur vocab was aight..decent wp...overall
decent drop..could've came harder tho
but u took this win..

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For some reason, the gay voting system won't let me make a vote, so if a mod could poll this or something??

Anyway

Watch me slit his throat while this idiot waits and flosses,
Cause someone once told me I needed to cut my losses.
Not brilliantly orginal, but it's still a fairly decent punch
Tired of talk- so I'm bringing the hammer to nail this whiz
... So he's got me killing in the name; of all his aliases.
pretty good punchline
Told him he was spoiled, and he started to look down south,
Making my dick the smartest thing to come out of his mouth.
okay punchline
Don't front with me, cause I know you're really not tough,
...Hell you're so god damn poor- I can't even call your bluff.
played, but still a punch
So when I flip scripts, you'll never catch my mentallity...
Trying to grab my concepts, when you can't grasp reality.
decent punch

your rhymes is like your name i'ma break them
just cause you got his name don't mean you as good as em
does this rhyme? weeeaaaaakkkk personal
I'ma take the tag off your shirt and put it on your toe
bullets kinda like your ma with the way they blow
A momma joke?? are you serious???
you better watch cause i'm not the one you wanna hurt
but try and you'll be sleeping wit a blacket made of dirt
i guess this line flows... but does nothing else
you can't rap so i say fuck u and your old alias too
you practically fed off his punchline about your aliases
i rap a bandana around my fist so all you see is blue
so you're punching him... not really a punchline (no pun intended)
i got a butcher knife that will slit your wrist
big hole so u gonna cover it wit more then a bracelet
does this even rhyme?? Even if it did, i can't see how this line flows

wordplay/punches: Marshall, for using more than 1 wordplay
flow: Marshall. AKA's flow was inconsistent
multis/internals: i didn't see any
personals:pretty much tie

thats weird but oh well upping....................

Voted For: A.K.A.

ok damn this was a wack ass battle but i think that A.K.A. won it break down

flow- tie
personals- A.K.A.
punches- tie
closer-tie
wackness-Marshall Law

so as you can see i think A.K.A. got this

V/A.K.A. return the favor linkz in sigg