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Voted For: Elusiv G

wow it was a long one man easy win 2 Elusiv G he had all the good stuff he was on topic all the tiem never went off stuckture was ok not too good but i liked his vers eloads it was coo

REALISTIK was alright was tight also but he went a bit off topic a little bit stuckture was also ok but wasnt good enuf i like how he put it how it happend and shit but wasnt good enuf

overall: EG took it eays he stay on topic all the time i liked his 10 times more 1 sided he wins

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Voted For: REALISTIK

i am going to go with realistik on this...but man...elusiv g...that was tight...i felt every word of it...both of these are awsome...and i wouldnt change shit about any of them, because then they woulndt be yours...nah mean...realistiks just seemed to affect me more...mind and heart...his had true emotion in it...you can tell time was spent in writing that...as well as yours elusiv g...both of the drops had great use of vocab...word play...true meaning...and you could flow them...realistiks more that elusivs tho...but other than that man...this was so hard...but it goes to realistik...

return vote on my battle posted in my sig...payday killin lil chubbs...thanks...~1~

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Voted For: Elusiv G

Acuity...better structure and was quick to da point...i could actually picture it happenning....Overall good

Realistik you just wasnt dat realistik 2day...i know ya capable of being real but not 2day...good structure but i think it took ya a while to get on point and wasnt really interested it....i really fell asleep...no hate of course just sayin...

v/Acuity

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Voted For: Elusiv G

REALISTIK: I liked your apporach on the topic... Flow was fine.. Structure.. fine.. but it wasnt very imaginitive..kinda like.. I was expecting everything that happened to happen.. no surprises or shit..

Acuity:
Ya shit was deeper.. more descriptive.. I liked it.. It was somethin we can all relate to.. we've all had close friends.. maybe not that particular situation but its easily imagined.. Flow was on throughout.. structure was neat and easy to read..

my only advice would be to type properly mostly.. dont say like "da" and "dere" shit like that.. cos it makes good lyrics sound dumb.. You hear mainstream cats do it.. but theyre all wack.. so be intelligent

Voted For: REALISTIK

Realistk you came very nice, it was smooth, flowed, you seem to be good at topical writing, and'v done it before.
Lusiv, you need to work on your imagery,flow,vocab.. you cant just rhyme g,me.. and make people get inrested.
for that v/Real