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4fil 12-16-04 08:20 PM

....... i gonna loose.... uppin

4fil 12-17-04 03:35 AM

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50Cal. 12-17-04 09:15 AM

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4fil 12-17-04 09:54 PM

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4fil 12-18-04 04:58 AM

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GangsStarShit 12-18-04 05:19 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I's Verse

Look at this bastard herb basher i outclass ya in all levels
Drop like boulder rocks ya flow come at me with small pebbles
^ aight opener wording could be better

Ya flames damp you no champ bars will shatter ya belts
Good record i cant respect ya you went and battled YASELF!!
^ Dope bar personal already killed this thats bannable ya know

You confessed to me that *ful*filling ya destiny is beating a vet
Be real you been here a long time......and you aint even close yet
^ lol this was good flowed well nice punch

No respect battle checks will show rooks you been murdering newbs!!
Every group stomped on C.S....been a long time since yall murdered a crew?
^ nice personal again good bar

Whore bitches youll be called misses ill make you my slut
Silence hype you aint 'violent type' they gave you the cut!!
^ Dope closer again flip off the crew name personal punch everything there

4fil's verse

real rappers use mics?..... then why you stil battling text
Heard you D/R and bite...... he even bites his "checks"...
^ 1st line good prolly better flipped also need evidence otherwise this = fake personal

some life you have............ with 6,149 damn posts..
Most active head.... but still for vet he aint even close.
^ 1st line meh wording could be better 2nd line similar to Empires 6th line

This battle mine... even if you bite it still wont effect this
"and the acedemy award goes to............ C.A.L.I..........
.............................for his class act....... of wackness.."
^ meh at this 3 LINE bar

Check C.A.L.I's punchs... to this battle the have no relivants
He's machanical they way he is always stirring beef.......
.............................I guess he's just Artificail Intellignets
3 line bar again...wording aight could be better but th A.I name diss was aight

Overall
C.A.L.I Got this the linked personal killed it in my opinion..,after that i felt 4fil woulda needed to produce...but ya didn't so v/C.A.L.I for the better verse overall...

...RTF on ma sig plz...

50Cal. 12-18-04 12:27 PM

^wheres the link?leave a link so we can both return a honest vote

50Cal. 12-18-04 04:13 PM

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50Cal. 12-18-04 10:29 PM

Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppp

D-ICED 12-19-04 02:39 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
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50Cal. 12-20-04 01:04 AM

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Viscosity 12-20-04 02:05 AM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
4Fil, tried to come hard, but in return it was ok...
no real vocab, flow was nice, metas none, structure ight.

Flow - 2/5
Punches - 1/5
Meta - 0/5
Structure - 3/5
Consistency/Laughter - 1/5

7/25

Cali had a good flow,good punches..

Flow - 3/5
Punches - 4/5 (kept punching, not that they were great)
Meta - 0/5
Structure - 2/5
Consistency/Laughter - 2/5

11/25

v/Cali.

50Cal. 12-20-04 08:59 AM

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Sik Wit It 12-20-04 09:23 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Wow...simple as it is... CALI came harder in this battle
complex hard-hittin punches, and the vocab was good too...
that crew-line shit was funny...but anyway4fil came simple..nuttin much tho..nuch much creativity on this piece here tho..so my vote goes to CALI


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