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Voted For: Parallel
Nice battle by both felt that 50 could have come better with more complexity but didn't. P come nice vocab and wordplay killed it, he droped an all round better verse. 50 come nice but you need to up your game man.. P's best bar,. You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter ^Nice personal, flow, vocab and punch. 50,,.. Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back ^Nice personal, and wordplay... Both come alright but I felt that P droped an alround better verse then 50. Vote ~ Parallel |
i cant believe this little kid....haha gets beat and has to do this o well uppin
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What should've rhymed was: Jackson Win one And it didn't...cockmuncher |
Voted For: Parallel
Para took this one punches were harder..better structure and tha flow was good too... 50..u need to elevate more...those punches were weak.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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sup man....since i cant vote i will give you feedback...pretty nice structure and all...still got alot of imagination huh...atleas you aint saying rimes like ''me'' and '' me '' lol anyway i didnt really like the opening...didnt rime but that line about:
Fuck it you always pull a “fancy-pants” and grab children Anyway Like an “illusionist” to are planet, & wears “short shorts”, How Gay it was my favorite one.. |
Voted For: Parallel
vote para heres my reason flow para punches tie opener-closer para vocab para imagry para multi para over all para and plz hit up on my links peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Parallel
A'ight...this was a close battle, but I'ma have to give it tp Parallel...some decent punches, a lil played, but it was enough to take this battle...better flow, better structure...no hate, return the fav if you havent already...links in sig...peace... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Parallel
Vote: Paralell Paralell Mad wordplay in ur drop g, liked the way it flowed and i think i spootted sum multi flow gettin going in this....all i can say really is work on your structure..you had some creative punches that were original and not played..keep dis up :thumbup: overall - 8.5/10 50Cent there was nothing wrong in your drop...except for the played as wordplay on wood not hitting back etc ur 2nd bar was not a punch you actuall agve him props...although overall it was a decent drop...work on more creative and original wordplay and punches..:thumbup: overall 7/10 RTF -links in sig |
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