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Voted For: final
Close battle... I didn't really like the topic, but O well... Final... Your shit started off really hot... Good emotion and word choice... I saw more potential for this verse if it could have been longer... I didn't really like how you ended it, with her poppin you wit a gun or whatever... But the beggining was real hot... 7/10-9/10 if you fixed the ending though... Conclusion... I read the first line and thought you were going to come whack as fuck... I mean... Inserted The Newly Cut Key's For My New Crib Into The Keyhole. Not really topical style... After that first line you picked up though... A Emotional Scar Imbedded My Memory & Stained My Girl's Trust. All My Feeling's For Her Were Banished,Love, Passion, & Lust. I felt that that was your best bar... I don't like how you ended it either... Both of you need to work on your endings for sure... v/final... |
This was feedback posted for Conclusion
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