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Voted For: ..Galieth..

first thing first I was told
that u r Zeke

second I this was a close battle
good verse from both and there were
some hard hittin personals
Exponent u had a raw verse also and punches were
funny lol
well anyway my verse goes to Golith cuz he came harder than exponet in this battle

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Voted For: ..Exponent..

eyedentity

I'll Prove Once And For All He Really Is A NewKid,*
After I Cut Him Up More Times Then DJ Whoo Kid,**
(KINDA WEAK OPENER...DECENT FLOW...6/10)

No Votes, Like You Never Had Member In Time 2 Rhyme***
Thinking You Can Put A Loss On THat Record Of Mine,
(KINDA PLAYED OUT...FLOW GOOD...6/10)

You Going Backwards Kid I Got You In Rewind,
Wanted To See Who Was Better So He Battled HimSelf, Loss
Then Ran To The Center Of Emrgency Help
(WAY PLAYED AND STRETCHED...NOT FLOW...WEAK DISS...5/10)

You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
(FIRST LINE IS WEAK...SECOND IS DECENT..6/10)

In fact G Does Suck A lot Of Dix, Cant You Tell By His Name,****
He's Prefixed It So He Can Come Back, And Lose In Pain,
(PLAYED OUT...IT DONT MAKE SENSE...5/10)

It's Clear The Equation's Solved Coz You Can't Beat Me,
When You Take Off Ya Boots You Smell Defeat, Don't Repeat Me*****
(NO REAL GOOD DISS HERE...FLOW IS OKAY...NEEDS WORK...5/10)

The Probability Of The Matter Is You'll Never Be Mathematical
Your Just Like Parallel Your Skill Is Seen Laughable
(KINDA PLAYED AGAIN B/C OF A SIMILAR LINE...DECENT FLOW THO...AND PUCH OK...7.5/10)

It Took Me Couple Bars To Get The Job Finished,
Your Perfect Record Has Finally Bin Diminished....
(WEAK CLOSER...FLOW IS OK...WORD USE WEAK...5/10)


AIGHT MAYNE...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS AIGHT...WYOU FLOW WAS GOOD HERE AND THERE, BUT WAS CHOPPY FROM TIME 2 TIME...YOU NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB AND WORDPLAY...GET MORE CREATIVE WITH YOUR SHIT....NAH MEAN...NO HATE...IT JUST WASNT THAT GOOD...




EXPONENT

This Geek Bites Off Everi Thang Including Zeke..
He Tries His Best In Rappin But Iss Truly Weak..
(KINDA WEAK OPENER...BUT WORDPLAY AIGHT...FLOW GOOD...7/10)

No Chance Of Beatin Me Like Glen Rice Being Tha Star Of Tha Rockets..
All These Biblicle Names And He's Still Not A Phrophet?
(NICE BAR...GOOD DISS...CREATIVE...WORDPLAY AIGHT...FLOW IS STR8...8/10)

Im Confused Why Is This Church Boy Acting Bad...
This Pussies Identity Gets Changed More Than Maxi Pads..
(LMAO...STR8 PUNCH...9/10)

4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
(DECENT BAR...KINDA CONFUSIN..NOT ALL WILL GET IT...6/10)

This Iss Like Vanilla Ice Beatin Cass In A Battle..
In Prison, His Gluteuos Maximus Wass Auctioned Off Like A Raffle..
(LMAO...NICE...CREATIVE...AND GOOD DISS...9/10)

I Was Close Ta Merkin Zeke Until Galieth Showed Up..
Like A Vaccum He Picks Up,Suck Then He Folds Up..
(DECENT...FLOW STR8...PLAYED OUT IN FIRST LINE...8/10)

I'll Make His Rappin Carrier Fade Like A Bowl Cut..
Ya Personals Horrible And Ya Punches Suck..
(KINDA PLAYED OUT...NO DIRECT DISS...JUST CHATTER...6/10)

U A Earl Boykins Me Shaq So Im Not Punkin Up..
This Kid Is More Of A Nut Than Eminem..
(UMMM...DOESNT FLOW 2 GETHER...DECENT PUCH THO...7.5/10)

His Onli Intercourse Came 4rm Bisexual Gentleman..
If Iverson Wass His Dad He Wouldnt Be Tha Answer..
(LOL...DECENT...NICE PERSONAL...BUT FLOW IS OFF...7.5/10)

Hes More Pussy Than A Group Of Female Exotic Dancers..
His Chances Of Surving Iss Slim Like A Victim 4rm Cancer..
(DECENT CLOSER...COULD CAME HARDER WIT IT...8/10)


AIGHT MAYNE...YOUR VERSE WAS AIGHT...NOT YOUR BEST BUT DEFFINATLY ENOUGH TO WIN THIS BATTLE...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS A LIL OFF HERE AND THERE, AND YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD UNTIL TOWARDS THE END...BUT EVEN WITH THE MISTAKES U MADE, YOUR TOPICS, AND WORDPLAY WERE JUST WAY BETTER...U WERE WAY MORE CREATIVE THAN EYE WAS...ONE SUGGESTION FROM ME WOULD BE TO MAKE SOME OF THE LINES MORE EXPLAINED...BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE WILL UNDERSTAND SOME OF THAT SHIT...SO LET THEM KNOW...


VOTE EXPONENT...IT WAS JUST BETTER...~1~

Voted For: ..Galieth..

i vote for u cuz u had way better flow and way better punches den the other guy E u really need to get better like elavate a lil bit and all dat like learn better punches and shit but for the main factor Eye u got this by punches and flow and rhyme!!!

Voted For: ..Galieth..

Eyedentity had this. you both have a simliar style but Zeke flows way better and punches way harder with it. This was a close battle. Exponent woulda got this if he flowed a little better and structure gfoes to both of ya.
My favorite line form eye is
You'll Never Beat Me I'm Like A Mathematical Equation
Exponent Aint It When Your Class Is Made From Retardation
iight exponent you had hard punches that were aiming right but like I said flow better. You had a couple of good lines. I liked
4rm Isaiah Ta Zeus And Now Galieth..
A Bitch Wantin War?Iss Like A Female Riot..
Nice one^^^
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