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look like some ones on their.....period lol

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yea looks like it is you o.0 haha upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: untouchablekilla

u got dis shit fam..first off logic da viagra n u spit hard line has been abused n its played......

opener-killa
structure-killa ya shit was neat
punchlines-killa
creativity-umm a tie
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-nun
finisher-killa...i like dat shit
enjoyed-killa...he came with some hott shit a few nice punchlines n his shit was a orignal no personals from nun of ya'll...so killa get my vote

links r in da sig..return da favor ya'll..WUN

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Voted For: untouchablekilla

Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/

God damn that was all FIRE your other line was ok but damn these lines were killer man you most def ill. the other guy was just saying a bunch of nonsense that wasnt very good and his lines were uneven and everything. all i can say is killa won but needs to take the bacslashes out his verse, godd battle but vote-killa

oh yeah i forgot to say VOTE ON THE BATTLE IN MY SIG

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Voted For: untouchablekilla

~Logic~

*Fuck head*,I'd rather battle*cordless* otha then this stupid bitch//
*More or less* He's like tha Booty *thread* an asshole thas fullov shit//
^good opener

I spit *XXX to see* if my expilcit fall will make u fall like *Niagra*
He's seeing colors, tha only tyme u spit hard is if dicks fullov *VIagra*//
^nice nice...

He be on tha*cock* around tha *Clock* but scrams when he sees me on tha *Block*//
Untouchable plese nigga tha only tyme you Ryde Ruff is when you see D_ on tha *block*//
^don't rhyme with same word, big no no!

U throwing punches kid and they all being intercepted//
Cuz u like System just a guest on this site that has'nt been Accepted//
^hehe, funny closer!

Vocab,structure n flow were tight. Had some nice punches in there, liked your closer but you also had some fillers that didn't really hit that hard. But overall, solid drop!


untouchablekilla

Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically Gifted/
^decent opener

Fuck Queer Eye For The Straight Guy get a Blindfold for this Gay bitch/
Cause Skillwise your lyrics are Nothing To See like a girl with Size A Tits/
^haha,nice!

Now this nikka is a dork forget the guns that he claims to hold/
Cuz the only thing he touchin are nine's..ten's..and eleven year olds/
^lmao...funny one!

Only time youd ever be on top of me is if u was standin on da globe/
I can go over the bar limit and u still wouldnt win if u ran ta strobe/
^good closer

Real nice drop, had some funny hardhitting things in there, made me laugh which is always good of course! Can't give any bad comments concerning flow, structure vocab cuz that was tight. Had nice creativity here and there, solid drop!