Voted For: Parallel

I felt parallel more in this battle I think his hits where harder,
his vocab was better his opener-his closure was iight and his multis need a little working on but it was iight and I think his vocab was better.

parallel
No use using punches named off-played-cookies
The wack thing is u get merked by-tricky-rookies
Do you get problems with your best-friend-epic
And then you still love to watch a first-person-flick
7/10 keep elevatin


oreo

winning will take longer than your mom giving back your audio,
you fell safe on the net, thats why you come home for lunch,
do you get bullied on the playground,i know that aint a hunch,
mop the floor with you but i can only aford a glock and broom
5/10 and same to u

hit up on my links peace.

ok uppin oreo pulled bitch again.......................

how you d/qed all my votes last battle bitch.............

ok uppin oreo pulled bitch again.......................

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Voted For: Parallel

[font=tahomaYea parallel got this 1 he had better wordplay punches personals allthough u came very weak Oreo must have to cause this was a weak battle the punches we're harder from paralel but they still we're weak u need to work on wordplay oreo and punches and structure is very bad ur personals seem'd like u didin't try to get at him at all u didin't use many personals i know u know what they are u juss came weaker this 1 ur punches fell from start to end well my vote goe's to paralell iight home boyz keep it safe and yeah for 1 thing yall still need to elavate unless this was juss a battle for weakness lol.[/font]