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ok uppin this shit........ my pms aint workin neither...... im offended, lol
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god damnit.......... 5 ups with no feed ^==============^
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THIS IS BULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease!! i willl worship the ground u walk on if u give feed.... i might aas well amke a fuckin new open mic if no ones gonna crit this
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fall at my feet den nigga......lol just playin dis kilo jus changed my name so i could battle. uppin da thread.................
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Damn im Lovin This verses Especailly yours FJAW N e ways I Liked it all I could really relate To your Topic Mayne If i was To even mention my favorite bars out of yall rymes it would be
FJAW it seems ya life is drownin in tha quicksand of hardships/ lost ya moms last year ya pops beat u n fill ya head wit shit/ And Kilo: help me help your self, So we can find that key on the vacant shelf but you keep persistin, i thought we were in love, but, youu wont listen But hade Plenty More that I Liked really It was hot and i Hope Yall keep up the Good Work |
Nice Topic,Like How You Started Ya Verse Off Woulda Been Hott If Wass On Audio.It Wass Some Vokab Through Out Both Verses I Like That.Kilo's Verse Wass To Simple Used Simple Rhymin Words,But It Wass Ok.Liked How You Stepped In Durin Tha Beggining Of Each Verse And Put A Heading.Iight,If You Had Better Vokab And Didn't Use "/" In Ya Lines I Woulda Gave You A 10 But You Didnt So You Get a 9/10 Simply Bcus You Had Some Errors Overall Nice Drop.....................
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Yo Cus I Left Feed Now Run Me Mih Money................
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Fuck-Jaw and kilo pretty good combo. yall have good chemistry
the whole thing flowed pretty well and was easy to read. i like alot of the rhymes yall had in there. also yall chose a pretty deep topic which is usuall hard to write about but it made sense and went along pretty well. yall had good metaphors in there too. ight son i dropped my feed back here's my account number gimme my 20 grand. lol XPETBK-34862 |
damn nigga u got all dat rv dough drop me some 2 lol just kiddin........uppin 4 feed
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lmao at only gettin feed bcuz im givin out money
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uppin........fux check out my new drop n spread da word on it cuz its been gettin slept on.....1
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............
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Two Words///// Gimme Feedback
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One thug realized the hood channels are like wood panels
Hard to nail as retards fail go to jail and treated like camels Burn and stress wounds and turn success tunes to crap His blinging situation caused a stinging sensation like rap Bees that swarm from trees hurt arms and knees sound the alarm Harm come, he was sadly defeated and badly cheated out Of his fame he dwindle in a swindle about street clout A stony block feels like a phony stock deal no money For his flow funny in society with a variety of dummy Techniques from peeps and scum beats, life is crummy Undergo combustion, thunder, and throw destruction on microphones Strong like Samson |
^^^^^^^^^ wat is that??????? didnt IE tell u to stop
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