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Voted For: Pleim
Pleim: You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains Aight personal, decent opener overall Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up Another good personal Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head Lol it's funny cuz it's true. You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck Good closer, with another good personal Scene: No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb Made no sense, weak opener overall dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame No punch u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun Decent setup, 2nd line didn't deliver messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine What the hell are you talking about? bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion :huh: Winner - Pleim, for better punches, and also had some good personals in there. Scene the only decent part of your verse was a setup, other than that your verse was garbage. You need to go back to elevating, hardcore-style. No hate though, Pleim just did better. Gimme an honest explained vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171268 |
thanks voters letz get summore in hurr............
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Posts: 123
Joined: Jan 2005 From: Los Angeles fa` sho Status: Online Text Record: 2-1 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: 28AD 5545 uppin for summore voterz who kno whut dey talkin bout |
Voted For: Pleim
Nemesis i notice you have elevated since last time i seen you battle... and Pleim i never seen you battle period so here goes with the critique: You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains ^^nice personal aight opener Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up ^^omg another nice personal lol @ the edge up part Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head ^^nice wordplay and another effective personal You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck ^^lol nice closer, you verse had some really funny personals, very effective... Nemesis: No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb ^^not too bad of an opener, but not really hardhittin dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame ^^nice flow but not very effective tho u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun ^^aight coulda been way better... messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine ^^nice flow, best bar so far... first half was decent bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion ^^nice closer...... overall your verse needed work, your flow was fine, really good, but you missing wordplay and/or metaphors, you don't need the whole works in ya verse but you still gotta work on ya punches and try more personals.. get more creative wit ya lines... but for this battle, Pleim won it.. |
Voted For: Pleim
LOLOLOLOLOL lamo.............hahahahahah.............pleim.... .......fuk ur funny u jus ate this kat.................lol ahhahahaha fukin krakin up readin it......You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol mayne good lines obviously good punches flow wuz dope phat lines and wrdplay.....lol funny line dat fukin farmer lin lol.........hahahahahha yo nemisis....elevate...he jus ate ur asss......... and yo return the favour....in my battles below lol hahhahha |
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