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ok, ima change it up so that the she is a he, but if u wanna keep it, u can change the sexes.

www.poetry.com

^Just steal some shit from there:thumbup:

i felt so sure about us, u were like a gift from god
the way you spoke, u spoke the voice of angels
i thought we had sumthing going on between us
but it seems im standing here all alone, deserted
i care 4 u, and i just gotta know if u feel the same
cause if u dont, i gues im wasting my time
i dont wanna spend effort on something that isnt there
i love u but im so confused
u said u loved me, that i was the best friend u ever knew
but now ur blowing me off and i dont know wut too feel
just tell me if u love me
or am i invisoning a thing of the past
a thing that was never there
cause i would never do anything to hurt u
i just wanna hold u in my arms
save u from the darkness
the cold, the rain
i just wanna love u

ok, it sucked, who gives a fuck?

so?????????????????????? u decide?

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Originally Posted by Butters

My life doesn't seem complete without you company.
Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind.
Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head.
Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before.
I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality.
And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion.
To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's.
Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know.
That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you.
Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration.
Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend.
Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's.
And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see.
Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's
Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses.
I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface.
Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion.
Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely.
So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's.
That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two.

surprisingly this is the best one so far...
If no one writes anything better by the end of the day, he will become the winner..

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Originally Posted by Phantom

Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?

actually, i wrote acouple of poems already, just go look in poetic scripture, so no im not lazy, and yes i like this girl, but i ain't gonna show no poem to her..

My feelings for you like warm sunshine on a spring day as it comes down
Your breeze of beauty floats my emotions in heavens clouds
You voice beckons me through wires to kiss your lovely lips
Yet i wait fearing rejection not sure if you will return my kiss
I have a map to the path to your love but detours have made me lose focus
I know not if we travel the same path or if the end is only of hearts broken
Im confused the fog of you and i misting my sight
But like a warrior who protects his kingdom i stand one time.............
Knowing you are worth the fight
I call you...you dont respond yet when you do it is passion of words
How am i to make a picture from the inaccurate blurs?

now pay me slut :thumbup:

dont duck me you little bitch.. ^

^i just told you set it up fag nobodys ducking you your are wack real simple

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1884770

800 posts.. so none of your d/r can vote.

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Originally Posted by C.A.L.I

Hmm, pretty good.. But im lookin for someone that could write somethin of what I really feel....

Poems is fucking soft.

:shoot: ^ yeah fuck THAT IMA HARD NIGGA POW POW POW :shoot:

yeah but in my opinion poems are too soft and showing emotions is weird to me.

I personally like poems better then Topical's now, because you need more emotion for poems which is what im better at then imagery which is needed for topicals...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phantom

Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?

co-sign... lol.......