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Voted For: /\nightmare/\
good job man keep going.................................... |
Voted For: Blackmage
both of the verse were average and a lil da same untill i re-read dem again...dis was hard 2 judge they were both very basic....blackmage with that herpes line was nice....lol....nightmare ur punches were elementary......no hate....neither of you used any multis i didnt c much wordplay...none 2 mention anyway...but vote-blackmage |
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Voted For: /\nightmare/\
black mage flow and struture is fucking horrible here punches and disses aint hit and were either played or childish as fuck it seems like a 10 year olf wrote this its madd just i cant say just corny is the best way to describe it here 2/10 nightmare decent struture you really not to cut down the length of you lines they are way tooooooo long punches and disses are decent still need work but they are decent vocab is good multis nice wordplay and personals are good also and helped line up ya punches good drop your better strture flow vocab and punches completely owned him 7/10 |
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Voted For: /\nightmare/\
morse code - very good verse here. came with a pretty solid structure, good wordplay and multies, nice flow the whole way through and some solid punches and personals in there. you had some allright vocabulary useage too blackmage - not a bad drop, just not as hard as morse codes, you had an allright flow, the strucutre was a bit off. you didn't have nearly as much wordplay and multies as morse code, and your punches were more sub-par then his. v/morse code return the favour, link in the sig |
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