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d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 04:28 AM.
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

yo, foreal I thought both of these were real good peices... Flows - well it Flowed real well- I love the way you ended- real strong... every line coincided with the next, no blockiness or trouble reading-- everything i'd expect...
DJ's- you could tell you were really feelin what you wrote cuz it was real to you, but it seemed like you had a little more trouble finding a way to make it all fit into this peice and keep the bolded side correct... and for that I think the entire peice kind of suffered, but it does make a very nice gesture... good shit both- but vote Flow.

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

im gonna have 2 give this one 2 flow

i liked dj with the letters and shit
that was some tight shit righ there
yours lines were kinda stretched a lil
you tried 2 fit 2 many words into ya lines
kinda like how i did wit my 1st topical
one of the reasons im loseing lol
but um overall it was a deep poem

but ima go wit flow
for a better flow and more direct
righ 2 the point and more of a direct
type of letter..nice wordplay
and good emotion...good concepts
and nice way 2 put em 2 words

nice battle

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