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Die Hard 01-15-05 01:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by •Para¶el•
Voted For: Legend

opener: L
closer: L
vocab: O
punchlines: L
wordplay: no one
stucture: O
flow: L
Cretivty: L
multis: no one

V/ Legend

Osiris
ok first of all i wasent feeling your stradegy it wasent there you need to work on your punchline syour to basic and cheesy...i would rather see creativty from your lines cuz you got potential but just keep poppin shit cuz you got potential but work on flow didnt flow enough to be a audio...

Legend:
hmm not the best ive seen from you but your punches were there...i saw how your stucture lacked...but your flow worked...and you were creative threw all the lines...nothing different from you tho...but you took this easly i think...

-Parallel


D/R vote if i ever saw one....
Seeing as they are buddies, collaborating on a lame diss to me...
*yawn* delete my vote plz.

Os1ris 01-15-05 05:51 PM

uppin this shit one mo time ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

parasite 01-15-05 06:05 PM

This was feedback posted for Os1ris
 
just checking polls......................

Os1ris 01-16-05 04:39 PM

up up up up up and away ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^!!!!!!

Macca 01-17-05 12:29 AM

Quit being gay ScarfaceXXL and leave RV. I'm not in the mood to own your ass. Wackness.
Uppyn.

Os1ris 01-17-05 09:14 AM

Uuuuuppppiiinnnnnnnn thhiiiiisssssss bbiiiiitttttchhhhh

Macca 01-17-05 07:39 PM

uppyn. What a wack up you faggot..................

Macca 01-18-05 06:00 PM

Uppyn this battle. I just wanna get this over with

Parallel 01-18-05 06:44 PM

why did my vote get d/qed im gonna tell strobe i give myfeedback good n shit....i explain who got the shit like openers n shit then explain a lil so im gonna tell him soon....

Os1ris 01-18-05 09:52 PM

ahahhahaaa hahahahah this guy^ cmon man if that aint dickridin ...blah uppin this thing

Katastrofe 01-18-05 10:09 PM

Voted For: Os1ris

Nice open and ending, you fell off in the midd. But nice shit cuz, that last punchline hurt my stomach....good shit cuz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Os1ris 01-19-05 11:30 AM

can we get some votes that are explained yall thanks or this battle will never be over blah uppin

Macca 01-19-05 07:35 PM

uppyn this battle for honest and explained votes. You fuckyn sluts. Vote.

Macca 01-20-05 06:06 PM

Uppyn this shit...................................

Os1ris 01-20-05 08:16 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^+1


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