Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this battle was kinda weak. not too good to me...
i think marv came out with tha win, cuase he came with more creativitie, and his structure was better. i think he had harder punches that landed in tha right areas, and his wordplay was also better. OVERALL, u had a good verse, i was feelin it for tha most part, but i still think u should elevate more, cause ur punches didnt land as hard as they shouldve
TBP-u had a nice verse, but i think most of ur barz were kinda played. not too much creativitie. and ur structure was fucked up, cause u had increadiblyyyy stretched lines. but u had some good shit. u tried to fit too much in one bar, and i think u should learn how to extend ur punches, without makin ur lines stretched. elevate on that. but overall, u had a nice verse, but i think u had too many mistakes to get my vote. NO HATE THO.
overall-i wasnt really feelin this battle. i seen better from both of yall...real talk. TBP, i was suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many stretched lines. marv, i was also suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many wack punches....but whatever. everybody can elevate, NO HATE...

PLZ RETURN THA FAVOR, CAUSE I TOOK THA TIME OUT TO VOTE ON YALL BATTLE. AND PLZ MAKE IT EXPLAINED, CAUSE I WAS HONEST WITH THIS ONE, AND I EXPLAINED IT THOUROUGHLY....

GOOD BATTLE. NO HATE...take all tha negative and positive feedback, and elevate....

~1~

hey...RTF PLZ....THA BATTLE AGAINST CJ......THAT NEEDS TO BE CLOSED QUICK.....


THANX

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Uppin again god damn at least we got 1 vote

Voted For: The Black Plague

Black Plague~your flow is good here, structure,but some of your lines are a little stretched, your opener was great,good wordplay.."hard heade like a lead dick", good bar...and personal on his other battle with wackestmc, i liked your vocabulary in this verse,one of your best lines was the tsunami line,"ya face was beach,i'll throw one to the shore","since ya moms only had wack ass to give me the win,i guess i owe one to the whore",THIS WAS YOUR BEST., well written, i also liked how you used names of celebs in your punches, very creative lines and effective bar with the tom cruise, mission impossible line..lol@the houston rockets line, your closing bar started off strong, but i think kurt cobain lines are played, but overall strong verse....good job.
marv~your opener wasn't that strong here, try to use words instead of abbreviations, to fit it all in, it seemed like you struggled, watch the spelling too, lol@the "fruit" done had a lot of dicks in his adams apple", dope bar there, nice wordplay with "BrOad pen is", i liked your closing bar, you had some good wordplay, but i dont think your verse was as effective as Black's..i just thought he had better punches....overall tight battle both..1

uppin 4 some more votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams....
u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S"


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Marv won. Easily. Black your shit was mad stretched and lacked punches. Everything was either non-existant or supremely weak. Marv has a vet-ish skill level but they style of a fuckin newbie. Switch that up and let 's die with July yo. Both can elevate on complexity and strength in punches. But at least I didn't throw up reading this. :)

v-marv

aigh uppin 4 more votes

Damn socrates sounds like a hate vote... unexplained too didn't say nothin about my verse

Uppin god damn vote people i will return the favor when the battles closed

Voted For: The Black Plague

All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick
But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick
nice punch here
Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you
Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2
eh, kinda decent here
Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"?
We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me*
nice persona’s here, punch landed
My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore
Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore
nice punch
Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives
You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective
punch was hard-hittin…
Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand
Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man
pretty decent punch here
You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket
Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets
eh, kinda decent here, punch was okay though
Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself
Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself
nice closer here

dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!..
talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"*
pretty decent punch
u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
wtf? Played like shit…didn’t make sense here
so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow...
yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho"..
decent punch here it was aight
dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is.
10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches"
weak punch wasn’t feeling it though
ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you....
use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles"
punchline was pretty decent, not hard-hittin tho
i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams....
u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S"
didn’t get this punch, but was played though
it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!....
cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE"..
decent
my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em
only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin"
decent closer

Overall both had good drops but TBP took this one
punches were hard-hitting and the flow to it, was decent
and had a decent persona up in there...

TBP you need to fix your structure though make it into a different
Font or lower ur flow or some shit though

Voted For: The Black Plague

MarvJay......
dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!..
talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"*
pretty good opener here....good personal...hit good....7/10

u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"
good wordplay here....good bar...7/10

so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow...
yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho"..
good wordplay again....didnt hit as good though...6/10

dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is.
10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches"
decent....hit ok....6/10

ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you....
use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles"
wasnt really a punch...kinda self glory more than anything....4/10

i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams....
u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S"
nice....hit good......7/10

it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!....
cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE"..
ehh decent.....5/10

my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em
only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin"
nice...hit pretty well...6/10


overall......48/80


Black Plague................
All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick
But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick
nice opener...good wordplay...7/10

Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you
Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2
lol....i loved this bar....dope....9/10

Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"?
We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me*
decent....nothin special...ok personal....6/10

My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore
Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore
lol i laughed at this.....hit pretty hard....8/10

Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives
You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective
nice....good wordplay....7/10

Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand
Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man
ehh decent....5/10

You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket
Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets
liked the set up line....punch was ok...6/10

Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself
Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself
pretty good.....7/10


overall.............55/80



i felt black plague got this one because of a couple of his bars were the best in the battle...the whole battle was pretty even except for about 2 bars that plague put down.......nice battle......i just felt that black came harder with punches....both had good wordplay....good punches...vocab goes to black plague....just a couple of bars that beat marv......return the favor please....link in sig