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This was feedback posted for Death
 

checkin pollz....................

Voted For: Death

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out:
opener: parasite
vocab: para
structure: mier
multis: both
closer: para
para just came harder & hit wit more punches in this battle then mier; also no hating but mier u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes more
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Death

MIER this wasn't good for you, not at all...you had no good punchez and your rhyme scheme was madd simple...you beat around the bush too much...you could've done so much with him having a name like "parasite" but you B.S.'d...work on your punchez duke...

Parasite, you should've switched your 1st and 2nd "line" of the 1st "bar" around that would've made the opener better but it's still good and so is the 2nd part of the 2nd bar...3rd bar you were talkin' about you, the battle's about the other person so try and cut back on that...nyce try on the multies, but you gotta throw some internal rhyme in to make it a REAL bar of multies...pretty good closer though kyd...

VOTE: Parasite

(give feed on a battle of mine, I got like 3 up now)