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Up this yall we need some votes to end this get at us
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Voted For: Blackmage
jea blackmage got this easily...he had an all around better verse....and his structure was easier to read..and had much stronger punches osiris' Wtf..ive seen better shit from you...ur punches was off...ok flow though,...structure was blah overall;;; blackmage got this easily Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo up this this almost over yall get at me come on.......
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^^^isnt that an unexplained vote by lord.wun....hmm......
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up this so we can end this.........................
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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
lol shit this battle was aiight...........good luck to both
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Voted For: Blackmage
all your words are like a cancer patients dying breath repentence cause in every verse you Only Spit 1 Really Ill Sentence(spells os1ris) rapverse needs to check how did you even get admittance i love this bar for what reason i don't know it just fits well i would break it down it on just so onesided to me blackmage got this for all around better structure rimescheme and general punches and wordplay... os1ris you need to step up you rime scheme was way off point and your closer theres no need to tell everyone thats your finisher ... |
Voted For: Blackmage
aight not the strongest battle in the world boith came pretty weak, didnt have any creativity, no hate tho Black ya had the more consistant verse i guess, never really had any nice noticeable punches, but some of your stuff hit harder, ya had the better flow an what personals ya both had ta offer, Black took them with eaze Os, no hate hommie, just keep elevating, ya verses seemed ta have more fillers than anythin, thats not good man, thats why my vote goes against you Ya gotta learn ta play off what u know about your oppenent, aan use harder disses towards him, all the stuff y'all had ta offer was a lil played NO HATE Just step it up a little... could y'all RTF in any of my battles ya see floatin around Front Linez, i got shit loads of battles so it shouldnt be hard thanks Peace |
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