This was feedback posted for Ill.Logic
 

Checkin the polls Famlay

Solid Drop from both y'all, stay up

Peace

upps.............................................. .........

im new to the site correct me if im wrong,

but telling specifically the person u voted FOR to vote in UR battle, then saying "all honest and fair votes are returned" doesnt quite click in my head

RiD

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Ill.Logic:

Ill.Logic got wins...but its clear for you to see that konfliktz hasnt,
cuz when i say this dude sucks-a-nut i aint talkin bout squirell orgasms,
nah
some call it a verse, some mockery, but it still aint the kids best,
fags don’t rap, wrapping balls maybe, check his interests,*
blah
Callin me a girl? Son ya messed up, now face the laughter,
Throw da pads,Cuz .k.onfliktz gets his periods before AND after,
lol could of bin worded better.. but still, decent
the picture of u winnin is faint,cuz damn kid you stepped to a saint,
I give u ur props, ur the closest to beatin ill since…wait…naw u aint,
omg... this was wack
Kon your wack son..your voice reminds me of a starter,
cuz u couldnt "rock-a-flow" throwin "stones-in-water",
no... comparisons are wack.

Verse was meh. You had ONE decent line. (The period thing.) The rest was weak. Your closer was a comparison. Please try and stay away from using those.

Kon:

A Dope Ill.Logical? thats Commical, Gives More head than an Inacurate Coin Toss
Kid Seems Mighty Confident But Dawg...Even Ray Charles Can See That You Lost
this has bin done to death
Claims he "Murders Pads" Didnt Believe em, Till I Looked Down, damn Hes Serious
Don't Gotta Look At His name to realize He in the middle of his Period
lmao... nice
Left My Crew, Cause He Realized He Didnt Fit In, Logic's next stop, Nok Out Kings
's elevation level Results to His Fear Of Heights,Fag Stays On Bottoms Of buildings
fake personals are wack. unless he really is afraid of heights, this doesn't work
ur Weak, Face It, Strugglin' with your big Mac's the only time your pushin a pound
And How You Gon' Claim Hard When Christopher Reids Can "walk" your Grounds
no
Refuse To Get Beat Like Easy Going Parents So You Winnin, Is Close To Zero..
Your Raps Kill Cats, So AFter I Merk You Imma Be Considered A living Super Hero
wack

Verse was a little better than Ill's. You had one half decent line(the ray charles one) and a decent line(the period thing).
Ill had his ONE line. Therefore, this is 1 vs 2. And so Kon wins.

V/Kon

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

vote fo Kontro


A Dope Ill.Logical? thats Commical, Gives More head than an Inacurate Coin Toss
Kid Seems Mighty Confident But Dawg...Even Ray Charles Can See That You Lost
Claims he "Murders Pads" Didnt Believe em, Till I Looked Down, damn Hes Serious
Don't Gotta Look At His name to realize He in the middle of his Period (Ill "."Logic)
Left My Crew, Cause He Realized He Didnt Fit In, Logic's next stop, Nok Out Kings
's elevation level Results to His Fear Of Heights,Fag Stays On Bottoms Of buildings
ur Weak, Face It, Strugglin' with your big Mac's the only time your pushin a pound
And How You Gon' Claim Hard When Christopher Reids Can "walk" your Grounds
Refuse To Get Beat Like Easy Going Parents So You Winnin, Is Close To Zero..
Your Raps Kill Cats, So AFter I Merk You Imma Be Considered A living Super Hero
nice shit, betta punches, flow, structure

Ill.Logic got wins...but its clear for you to see that konfliktz hasnt,
cuz when i say this dude sucks-a-nut i aint talkin bout squirell orgasms,
some call it a verse, some mockery, but it still aint the kids best,
fags don’t rap, wrapping balls maybe, check his interests,*
Callin me a girl? Son ya messed up, now face the laughter,
Throw da pads,Cuz .k.onfliktz gets his periods before AND after,
the picture of u winnin is faint,cuz damn kid you stepped to a saint,
I give u ur props, ur the closest to beatin ill since…wait…naw u aint,
Kon your wack son..your voice reminds me of a starter,
cuz u couldnt "rock-a-flow" throwin "stones-in-water",
ya shit wuz aight, i found it kinda hard 2 read tho, u shouldnt have made it small and bold. no hate mayn.

can u return tha favor fam?
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179864
thanx, holla atcha boy, werd