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Voted For: Hot Sauce
lol funny ass battle......hot sauce came with it tho...the one ya shit was 2 basic 4 em fam...try again opener-hot structure-one punchlines-hot creativity-hot multis-hot flow-hot wordplay-hot personals-nun from both finisher-hot enjoyed-hot.....he took basically every catagorie...but hot u step up ya personals fam dat verse couldn't been directed at ne1 nahmean and u dont have 2 use a multi every line...the one try da be more creative fam and stop spittin so basic return da favor..link in my sig...or whuteva u c my name on just vote in da shit |
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Voted For: THE_ONE
This was kinda one sided. Social.Outsyder, you still need to work on your punches a hell of a lot, but you actually had some, whereas Hot Sauce kinda babbled in net gangsta talk. Both of you could use a lot of elevation, Keep going. Good Battle. |
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Voted For: Hot Sauce
Hot sauce got this 4sho... Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse.... Social, ya structure was everywhere too dont seperate bars like that man gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use Punch through ur cavity leave you a mindless drone..... ur hits are known for their laxity, Please......mine the illest thrown.... ^^^ like that it was a good idea but ya didnt use it as well as u could.... nah mean? no hate, just be more creative hot sauce got this for the overrall better verse (besides structure) RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever Thanks Peace |
Voted For: Hot Sauce
One sided battle here...... Hot Sauce, you had more creative and thought out punchlines in my opinoin. You had the wordplay, and the multis here, and there. had good metaphors, and similes as well. Good Drop Social Outsider, you should elevate mane, you got the structure, and flow correct, but I'd suggest trying to be more creativie with your disses, and just use a lot more metaphors, and wordplay. No hate... V/ Hot Sauce make sure 2 return the favor |
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