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Voted For: KO-Cain

pretty good battle i gotta go wit ko cain though his imaginary was good flow was mostly on point vocab was alright but bottom line is he got his story across clear an effectively nice read dj em sce shit was decent i just thought you coulda put some different words in their to make the story come across clearer nah mean structures were both good so good battle juts gotta go wit ko cain was feelin his verse....vote-Ko cain

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Voted For: d.j em sce

i was feelin DJ's drop more. I think he came harder in this one, and played well with tha topic, AND STAYED ON TOPIC THRUOUT THA WHOLE VERSE.
KO-yo had a nice verse. but overall i wasnt feelin it homie. u started off clean, it was nice, and creative, and even unexpected, but then after a bar or 2, u just changed yo whole style up, and started to drift off topic. after tha first couple barz, i started to get uninterested, and bored. i think u should work on comin more consistent, but this wasnt tha worst drop i've seen b4, thats why i think this was a pretty good battle.
DJ-yo verse was amazin, and interesting. i think u stuck to tha topic way better, and that means a lot in topical battles. i think u came w/ more creativitie, and originailty, but i think u kinda tried too hard on that, but its coo. i also think u came more consistent in this one. yo started off dope, and stayed that way thruout yo whole verse, and that said alot. u even showed more emotion, and character in this one, thats why i had to give u tha vote.
overall- this battle was rather close, but i think DJ came out on top in this one. no hate KO, just elevate a lil more family, and come harder next time. DJ u could also elevate a lil..NO HATE, yall came hard in this one..

intro-KO
Rhyme-DJ
Creativeness-DJ
topic-DJ
STRUCTURE-KO
style-KO
closer-DJ

v/DJ

PLZ RTF ON ONE OF THA BATTLE LINKS IN SIG, AND MAKE IT XPLAINED, CAUSE I TOOK MY TIME OUT TO VOTE ON YALL BATTLE...SHOW SOME RESPECT

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Voted For: KO-Cain

Ko-Cain... I like the way you approached this topic, not a way anyone else would approach it... So 10/10 on creativitie... But your shit was crazy with multies as well, which in my opinion, makes it easy to read... Also, your lines werent short, but they werent stretched, which i like... Good emotion and imagery... Overall... 96/100...

DJ... I didnt like the way you approached it, i mean, your topical was by no mean bad... But you approached like anyone else would... I felt more emotion in your verse, it just lacked creativite... 84/100...

V/Ko-Cain

^^^fuck you bitch....lol j/k thanks for the feedback.....man i feel ya...i wrote that verse in like 10 minutes if even...but yo
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yo, KO...no hate...and DJ, u better RTF that shit bitch.....




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well, its late and i'm tired so i really don't
feel like going into great detail with my breakdown,
but i felt like KO took this. DJ had a pretty good
verse in all but i was simply feelin KO's a bit
more as well his take on the topic. It was close
though, his just seemed to connect with me
where as Dj's kind of failed to. I don't think this
counts, because of the gay ass post minimum
but those are my thoughts. Regardless props to
both.

-peace

Voted For: KO-Cain

Alright I think that KO-Cain won this easily... He approached the topic a lot better than dj and I could catch on to his flow a lot better. dj it was a good idea what u did with your peice but i think that you were lacking in emotion and that type of shit. peace.

Voted For: KO-Cain

oo shit.. Kocain my favorite drug came fire on this shit.. u TIGHT FOR A NEWB.. u had nice emotion and good imagery. and this was structured way differently then most topicals out there nowadays. i like how u have a new style.. good flow the whole way thru.. and u actually had multi's in a topical thats pretty dope.. DJ u need to step it up a little bit.. i mean u came hard.. and i believe u would have won this battle but not today and not versus ko-cain.. ur flow was good and u had nice emotion.. but i just felt like i was inside KO's topical.. and i really could get into reading it.. so no hate to either.. KO- just came harder a little bit on this one... DAMN HE SHOULD BE BEST ROOK OF THE MONTH.. kid is fire..