Voted For: Untraceable

Hot Sauce

deepthroat so much ure BLUE-IN-THE-THROAT, jus for a FEW-OF-URE-VOTES,ure not supposed to 'play wit DeAtH' but ure CREW-IS-A-JOKE/
^good opener

explode ure LIVER-N-SHIT,BITTER-N-QUIK, droppin garabge like u LITTER-U-PRICK, u could ''SUB-SCRIBE'' ure verse to ''VIRUS'' n still not DELIVER-IT-SICK/
^virus-line is sorta played

Untraceable ? im SWEARIN-THIS-THUGS-GAY, its SCARY-IN-SOME-WAYS, cuz u lose 'weight around SUBS' jus like JERRY-FROM-SUB-WAY/
^decent decent

ure FEELIN-THE-HOT-SHIT, leave u SQUEELIN-N-COUGHIN,TEARIN-N-SOBBIN, as i 'dign up dirt on death' like im STEALIN-A-COFFIN/
^bleh,not feeling it


change up
looks like i av sum brutal thoughts to ~MESS~WID~ ill be messin wid u's more than michal jackson ~CARESS~KID~ i dont no wat ya dick ~LESS~DID~/
^okay okay, good one

stickin dildos in pre ~SCHOOL~ASS~ in a sick fantasy that ya a teacher of a ~CRULE~CLASS~ u been smokin too much ~FOOL~GRASS~/
^hehe, nice

I'm ~REFINED~IN~DECEPTION~ so ~REWIND~THE~AGRRESSION~ otherwise no-show or pray for ~DIVINE~INTERVENTION~/
^bit self-glorification so bleh...

I'll ~INSCRIBE~YA~WITH~SECTIONS~ from all ~THE~ ~RHYMES~THAT~I~MENTION~, battle me 'head to head'? my ~'MIND'~IS~A~WEAPON/
^again self-glorifying so nope

i use mine to rap u use urs to ~STRIP~YOUTHS~ dont get mad cos im givin u trouser ~ZIP~TRUTHS~ damn im rippin u all u shud stand in ~RIP~BOOTHS~/
^funny

it just makes it less hastle ~FOR~ME~ to giv ya a lesson a ~HARDCORE~DEGREE~ dont piss wid this ~RAW~EMCEE~
^okay closer

First of all, your structure makes your verse unpleasant to read but I understand that is just your writing style so I'll just focus on the content of it then. I was definately feeling your flow, had that on lock for sure and the vocab was good as well. Like how your rhyme scheme works and you had some good punches in there, not too much personals though. Too ba ya kinda fell in the middle because you had some self-glorifying lines in there which I didn't like. But overall, this was a good drop, enjoyed reading it. Maybe some more hardhitting punches or mad personals next time...
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Untraceable

this kid says he is so hot you cant drink him*
musta been in a dif mind state or jus not thinkin
^okay opener

cuz the only way he will be a myth or a legend*
is by adding a loss to his record within seconds
^nice one

thats a lesson learned cuz ill leave sauce burned
which will turn COLD STEEL into ashes inside an urn
^hehe, funny...

concern the leader with another loss on his side
so get back to the kitchen where ya bitch ass resides*
^lolz, good thinking

everone run for ya lives because hot sauce is now here
but when thats said not a single person dissappeared
^aight aight, nothing bad so far

cuz aint no one feared of a sauce thats really not hot
the only thing hot on this bitch is the pussy spot
^lmao...liking this one

damn hot sauce did i just reveal ya SECRET identity
better be expecting it to have been revealed eventually
^okay, sort of a filler but it's cool

and the only way you are gona be as cold as steel*
is when ya freeze up dropin, like lyrics are a big deal
^good closer

Good structure and you found a nice balance with your vocab, had your flow on lock as well. The strongest aspect of your verse were the personals, you really kept on dropping them: line after line. Liking that, some could've been worded little better maybe but overall they were nice to read. Not too much played stuff, tried some creativity here and there but as I already said, some lines had potential but didn't land too hard because of the way they were worded.
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In the end my vote goes Untraceable for the better personals and such but Hot Sauce had a nice verse as well so no hate...