This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

wack battle on da real...no hate to any just stating i know marv can do way betta...unless he has a ghostwriter...

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

Ok battle.

Marv: If you had proof of his alias then I would say good personals, but he says he isnt, and u have no proof so ya that cancels out the personals. punches were ok, but your attempt at wordplay was bad. a porno line? best line was PMin for votes. work on your wordplay.

KI: Ok verse, but your punches weren't that great. you had more then Marv, and a little bit of personals. you need to work on your personals and metaphors. your structure isnt that great either. overall work on personals and structure.

Overall: Both of you need to work on wordplay and provide more proof for personals, or try more. work on punches and metaphors as well.

v- KI

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

kustom got this battle cuz i dont think he's j dot and marvs whole verse was based on that plus kustom had better mettas

return the fav with an honest vote on the battle in my sig

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Voted For: ~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~

hmm... i didnt know kustom=jdot...
but who cares...? anyways, kustom gets this battle on account of crazy punches. kustom's punches was funny like the sudden death one! this shyt. was classic, his punches hit harder than marv J's and it made him win this battle. i liked the ryhming *howeva prewritten it was*
anyways,
V/ Kustom Image

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin......polls................................

y r da checkin da polls in another nigga battle??? oh u down with nok so u a dickhead lol

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