Voted For: intensify effect


IE- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

Durban - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/ IE
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what the fuck??

punches???in a topical??? are you completly stupid????


PUNCHES ARE NOT SHIT IN TOPICALS!!!!!!

Voted For: Durban

intensify effect: let me start by stating the aspects I found best in your verse which were vocabulary and flow. You had real good vocabulary, nice level of complexity and yet easy to understand and follow. You had your flow on lock, I was definitely feeling it. Downsides were the structure, it was kinda all over the place in my opinion and the emotion was lacking here and there (no hate). I do like your approach of the topic, it was quite original and I like that in a topical. The imagery wasn't all that but your word choice makes up for it. Just work on the emotion and imagery a bit more next time but I guess it was kinda difficult due to your approach of the topic. Still enjoyed reading your piece though, it was interesting and bet it would sound dope in audio.


Durban: not the most original approach probably but I still like it though. What I enjoyed most about your piece was the excellent imagery, you managed to portray the image inside my mind throughout the way you worded everything. The emotion was good as well, am feeling your flow and the vocabulary was impeccable. The structure was nice and I just don't see anything wrong about your verse, you wrote a nice topical. Good job! Maybe next time seek for a more creative approach of the topic, just a thought ;)

Voted For: Durban

this ones goin to durban

dam.. felt both sides of this shit

mad good from both of u

Voted For: Durban

This was an okay battle..

effect: your verse basiclly was weak.. very little emotion, and okay imagery.. I thought you were better then this.. your vocab aswell was very off and not good at all.. Im guessing that you haven't battled in a while, but you need to re-elevate on everything..

5/10

Durban: YOur verse was amazing man, I could seriously feel emotion, and see way more imagery.. your vocab as well was on point.. you basicllky took it with imagery and very nice intro...
9/10

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i was gonna vote on this but honestly...
i dont think its right see'in that link just
is'nt fair durban...this should be closed..
nice verse n all but thats borderline cheating..
.
pz

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...im just checking the polls gentlemen...
^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^


...the super.....c.s.

^^^that cat yung wun is really hot sauce. he's been riding i.e.'s dick for ages. clearly its a d/r vote homie.

lets keep this on the up and up fellas.


...the super............big bad crhyme sin...

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Voted For: Durban

intensify effect
dat shit was hot great multis nice flow.
i liked da variation on da topical

durban
u set da sceen up perfectly in da beggining and further on.
but u really shined from da 5th bar down

this shit was great but ima give it to durban becuase even tho
intencify came sick wit it, i thought he should have got deeper
on da subject