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N.Tavarez 03-04-05 07:57 PM

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Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 07:15 AM

Upping
Upping
Yes Yes Y'all.........................

N.Tavarez 03-05-05 10:21 AM

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Meta4 03-05-05 12:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 
checkin polls.....................................

Parallel 03-05-05 12:25 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

damn fuckin close battle

Buck
the stucture wasent good but the flow was and the punches were super dope ay the vocab was so dope too i thought if you would of had better stucture it woulda been super dope but i liked your verse the best anyways...pz

Hot
yo the stucture was great but your punches didnt hit the way i thought they would your vocab was weak but all you really had were punches and stucture no real multis or anything the punches were ight but i didnt feel them as much as i felt bucks work on thos but you did use more personals but i felt buck had the creativty more...peace

Vote: buck.shot

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Parallel 03-05-05 12:26 PM

RTF in my battle with final the links in my sig thanks

M&rk 03-05-05 01:41 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

You couldnt get BOLD.... if your whole verse was Capsized
...prolly played, but best line of the battle
Da last time U seen a VET of any sort..was on the Holiday
...coulda hit alot harder
^^^ only wordplay in ya battle that was close to a hard punch


buck-
I'ma slap this kid with BabyPowder
Strap an ''Amp'' ta ya Ear ''Drums'' so u can Hear Me Louder
^^^ wordplay, but not a punch, thats just filler
Or i'ma ''Split ya wig'' like halfin a Toupee
^^crazy played, and didn't even come witty or hard hittin off a played concept
Fuckin perv, reppin NY an you wonder why they call it ''Queens''
^^^i guess decent punch, but not reallly, its played cuz i used it on someone from queens and worded it better.

vote-hotshh cuz his few wordplay lines were played like yours but worded better and hit harder... and non of your metaphors were good so im not even lookin at those. also hotshh got structure by far. wack battle all together, it was a decently long battle and ya'll only had like 3 lines each with wordplay. step that up.

hit my battle up in my sig wit a good vote like this.

Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 01:56 PM

Thaknks ^^^^^^
i guess

Uppin y'all

yes yes y'all, vote vote vote

Dirty Nigga 03-07-05 11:39 AM

Vote on this shit peoples!!!!!!!!
god damn y'all sleepin like this

Dirty Nigga 03-08-05 12:09 PM

Uppin this for some honest votes
leave a link n we'll both RTV

Master Minded 03-08-05 04:40 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

lol hotshh! took this one, he dropped harder, he gets this win, better punches and meta's no real wordplay from either, Buck Shot. you dropped weaker, not good, no real personels in here, but hotshh!! had better multi's flow structure and punches

v/hotshh!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

N.Tavarez 03-08-05 06:33 PM

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Dirty Nigga 03-11-05 09:10 AM

how was my vote removed but yours aint?
just as much feed
blah

uppin again

Op!n!on 03-11-05 09:51 AM

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 
Good battle you guys....checking out the polls....

Wet Willy 03-11-05 10:43 AM

Voted For: hotshh!

wow.. no hate buck.. cause i kno we have our differences.. and u brought this battle to my attention.. but hot definitely good this one.. flow was nice the whole way thru on both parts although bucks was a little choppy at points.. structure was alrite.. buck u should try doing syllable counts.. it'll make ur verses sound nicer... but punch wise.. hotshh killed this... buck you need to learn the concept of wordplay.. your using similes and metaphors in ur verses but they dont have the proper wording to make them hit hard.. u had a few nice lines in there.. as to where hotshh had hard punches the whole way thru.. buck i think u just need to work on ur punches. and keep practicing that and in good time u will be able to batle the best on this site.. but for now.. battle people more on ur skill level.. no hate just keep working on it.. pz...


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