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Voted For: .Grafh.
.grafh. you took this one easy.. your opener and closer were alot better than his.. i liked ur vocab. and alot of your wordplay there were no lines i really wasnt feel'n it had a good flow. and your metas and personals werent all that bad 6/10 aka nightfall... wow you need alot of work.. your whole structure was off. your vocab wasnt all that good either.. your punches were weak.. my suggestion go and read battles and looks for help in the tutorial threads no hate jus elevate Vote//.grafh. rtf links in the sig... honest votes only please |
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Voted For: .Grafh.
this wasnt a very good battle put grafh got my vote cause he had the punches that actually hit flow wasnt that good structre was good yo man sayin some ones gay isnt original anymore never really was an ight verse best line-Ya da kind ta buy wal-mart t-shirts and rock da "price-tag" New ta RV,i see that you didnt read da welcome sign,"no fags" 5.5/10 please return the favor in my batle in my sig peace |
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Voted For: .Grafh.
well this was easy....blahh battle akn....structure needs work....punches need work....no self glorifying yourself....comparing yourself to the boogeyman = not a punch....elevate alot....you had stretched lines, which is bad....you never really dissed graph at all, your concepts are basic, need to keep consistency in a battle and add more complexity to your shit....this was one sided, elevate alot dude grafh....disappointed in you too..haha, nothing that special in here, basic as well, but you had punches that hit (although they were weak, most likely takin it easy), but yeah, flow was okay....finisher was blahh, i know you can do better, so not much really to explain v/grafh, for having punches that actually dissed his opponent |
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