Voted For: OneStepBeyond

you win becuse you got a mad better structure and your punches where decent
i didnt get bored at all, but since Kesse your structure was off which mad it harder to read which made it wack

both of you need to eleavte with the punches and metaphores

decent battle tho just work on strucuture Kesse

can you return the favor on any battle that is in my sig

thanks

i don't think me or kesse even cared about this battle... lol

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haha, no kidding eh.......i'll just upp it here and there hopefully to get it closed lol

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Voted For: Kesse

really really close battle i'll break it down

keese.. your structure was wack.. ha. but yea overall i thought you had much better vocab and personals.. you kept your punches coming i liked the cereal line that was funny.. your closer and opener werent to shabby either.. only thing he owned youon was the closer and structure.. but that wasnt enough to get a w

one step beyond. i liked ur drop .. its jus that you didnt have the vocab that keese had. he had you in alot of aspects the only thing you owned him on was the closer.. i laughed out loud when i saw that haha nice.. you were really creative but your didnt have the punch

vote//keese

rtf with only honest votes.. links in the sig

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