yo uppin this fuckin battle yo.....lets just do a draw or somethin

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

to me, this one easily goes to mista,

mista-good:i liked the metaphors, similes, werdplay, and punches, you also had a nice structure and flow, the links also made this verse more catchy and made the punches have more meaning
bad:i didnt really like the opener OR closer, i also felt like you cood have upped the multies, and vocab

judicial-good:i liekd the multies that WERE in there, i also think that you beat your opponent in vocab,
bad:your structure wasnt good because of some strectched lines, felt like your puinches just didnt hit hard in this verse, i also didnt like your opener or closer either
both:both shood try to mainly work on your openers and closers

opner:tie
closer:tie
multies:J
flow:M
punches:M
werdplay:M
vocab:J

rtf....links in sig

v/mista_auth3ntiq

one more fuckin vote to get this shit closed out...its been up for like a fuckin month now..........fuckin get this shit closed out

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jus check'n the polls...............nice drop MA.........

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

holy shit.......this battle is still open??????????

Voted For: Judicial

Judicial i'll hit you with 7 bullets, and have your soul rising to the above
This kid is retarted. Dq gave me the scoop ya'll both have sex with fake love
6...gud personal, 1st line was filler though!!
C'mon mane, even my flow's tighter than you like bill cosby sweaters
You a pussie but still ain't breaking "V"'s you elevate? please never
7...better line, 1st line was gud!!
Even though you don't have a mother, your punches still feels like purses
This kid aint elevating, and i know why, you live under the earth (basement)
4...weak line, hell the rhymin is barely there and that's bein generous!!
I don't know how you can be a gangstah when you scared of a mice
And nigga my punches are hot, so that bat in your pic, won't save your life
5...a failed attempt at a solid punch!!
Kid i'm like a daddy to you, im'ing me is "this verse good?" You've already been sonn
Like a crown that is ghost, judicial your punches ain't touching me, nor my throne
6...aight closer but the 1st line was wack!!

OVERALL: 29/50


opener:
like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit cha head like kennedy
dis bitch aint sick,he just got a scholar in seredepity
6...i like this, but lay off the sick shit cuz its becomin more played by the day!!
killer:
hiz name says auth3ntiq but boy u aint real kid
soft n mushy,vanilla puddin,like bill in ya sig
6...nah! failed personal!! not feelin it!!
you should have quitted b-4 dis thread u submitted
even if i swallowed your eyes u couldnt see me spittin
7...nice the meta was cool!!
im causin defection and deep depression to mistas lyrical progression
he regrettin dis battelin session,u rap wit homos obsessions
6...nice multi but gay shit = played!!
finisher:
thanks 4 settin dis charity,cuz u battelin me,wins im only collectin
like when u checked-in in dis battle you comin second even wit god u couldnt handle my confessions
5...weak closer and the 2nd part was stretched!!

OVERALL: 30/50

Aight, no offense to either MC's but this battle was weak. A lot of played concepts and ure vocabs are both too basic as is ure wordplay. Need to throw in more complex shit, get creative, drop more personals that are decent!! mista u had the personal but they were weak, and i think two bars u dropped were very weak and that is what just lost u the battle!!

V/ - Judicial

- Return the fav on the Kesse battle, links in the siggy!!!

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Decent battle.

MA:
Punches were ok, but your flow kept falling off. Not huge, but enough to be choppy. Personals were nice. Good dirt, but they could have been made a lot better. Too much stating and not enough punching. No real wordplay or multis. Overall decent verse, but work on inegrating some wordplay and better punches.

Jud:
Ok punches, but you lacked in real personals. You had some wordplay but other than that nothing that good. Lot of self glorification, and weak punches just overall. Work on better personals and punches. I didn't like you homo punch, played man.

Overall both of you need to work on your punches.

v/ Mista Authentiq