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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
yeah buck i like ur verse in this 1 if i could vote on ur battle i would vote 4 ya fo sho hol it down 4 the crew
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Voted For: Buck.Shot
WHOAH given it to Buck Good battle shout outs to both of you fams, damn nice shit but Buck was alot harder with them punches then Forgotten Structurew goes to Bcuk as well very good The rest was pretty much a tie ya both had nice flows n sum good wordplay n all but the punces were jus rockin forgottens head sum of those punches from buck were very creative Them Coochie Lips, wouldnt Flip the Script, If it was just 1 Page Cause i'm Wine, an your old cheese, ya get WORSE WITH AGE! Buck, That is a tight fuckin punch lol, feelin it and its a shame cause the time that you spend on this site being wasted/ since you've been in 102 battles and are still in great need of elevation... (Forgot ths botu all the harder ya got the punches were soft man elevate on that a lil bit ya guys werre pretty equal no doubt Buck got the punches multies n structure though so he gets the vote from me Punches- Buck Multies- Buck Structure- Buck Flow- Tie Personals- None good battle fams return the fav wit my battle below my sig holla |
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yeah buck u really put it 2 this fag cuz his flow is really forgotten...........lmao i'm funny but 4 real good battle dawg u r elevating in eva battle this should b a eazy sweep 4 ya
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This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
both were aight
but if i cud vote i'd vote fo buck.shot 1 |
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Voted For: Forgotten Flow
Obvious who won this battle here... Forgotten takes it easily... Forgotten- Nice personals here.. First line was aiite, second line was nice man.. personal hit nice here...the whole 2nd bar was wack, didnt understand it, personal missed... But 4th line was pretty nice, good punch here and and a nice personal on his rec..lol... The Open mic shit was an attempt at a personal, but u coulda got more creative wit it.. J DOt line was funny.. kinda played, but nice... the " Non Stop" line was decent, again a nice personal wit a punch in there, but u coulda gotten more creative with it.. Closer was nice, maybe ya best line here.. Shit hit hard, and prolly won u the battle... Buck- Decent verse from you.. coulda came harder tho.. Ya lines were nice, but just simple.. and you only had punches... Shoulda came wit some more personals... Openr was nice.. god punch there.. and the 3-4 lines was aiite.. jus basic punches some creativity... Some more aiite punches after there, doin aiite.. then when i seen that Pinstripe/Dyke line, i was like what the fuck? Shit was wack, and took away from the rest of your verse.. Lost you the battle.. Closer was aiite, nice punch.. But you coulda had more personals... Overall- Flow takes this with harder personals, and a better and more consistent verse.. Good Struc from both, and decent flow and Content, but Buck shoulda came wit more personals as i said, and Flow's personals just killed it.. Vote/ Forgotten Flow |
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Voted For: Buck.Shot
meh, i thought esco had the better shit in this one, straight up, had harder punches, personals, and more things stood out, ff, your verse was kinda a drag to read, nothing really interesting.....so, basing off harder punches, esco gets this for sure, both had everything else down aight, cept FF your structure was a little off, but whatever........multies, word. v/buck.shot......rtf if ya could |
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