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50Cal. 03-20-05 01:52 AM

^omg that dont count i outscored him percentage wise like crazy foo i got 12 lines he has 18 i crazy outscored him according to you i won my averge is way higher omg count the fucking lines wtf dumb kids

High-Dro 03-20-05 03:57 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

DOPE BATTLE!!

Spektikul- good flow, really nice punches and personals...lol at that shit about Palm-a-la...nice wordplay..i like how u attacked his "pimp" claims and his size, and his employment...overall, that verse didnt really have any holes...nice job, nuthin to recommend

C.A.L.I - your verse was real dope too....your punches were dope..and i liked your wordplay...especially the trash weed shit....i just felt that his personals out did yours...but you are a dope text battler..nice job..keep spitin

KOOL COL-B 03-20-05 04:10 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

ooooooooooooo shit, this iz a close ass battle. but i gotta give it 2 spek. u both had really good punches, but spek had mo of them. spek had betta strucutre. u both had good flow. spek had a betta opener i thought. this wuz a hard battle 2 vote on, cuz both of u guyz had dope verses. but cali, i dont really like how u got tha ........'s half way thru a line, then tha rest of tha line iz below it, i dunno, it dont really matta that much. but good battle. no hate cali. werd

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TeamOne 03-20-05 05:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
im pretty sure spek won this.......... checkin polls

Big City 03-20-05 05:28 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

wow this was a good ass battle but spektikul took this jawn . cali put up a good fight n erething but damn spek's punches was hard in this one. he had better flow, structure, and word-play. both had good vocab that wasnt an issue, but what really did it on this one was the wordplay on speks punches.

opener- cali had the better opener for this one
closer- cali also had a better closer
multies- spek had multies that really made his verse more flud if u feel on that. it helped the punches hit better

calis' best bar=Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard
You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'......

call me the chessmaster!!
^^^this was hot, nicec wordplay good delivery, shoulda had mroe of these in the verse nah mean

speks best bar=Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border
He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order
^^^haha that joint won it for me, nice punch n personal

overall-good battle but spek's punches got him this W..
return the favor, links in the sig ....1....

Spektikul 03-21-05 01:27 PM

wtf...

Uppin I guess...

TeamOne 03-21-05 01:48 PM

^^ lol..... its funny cuz Flow got the percentages RIGHT Cali.... u didnt make it outa high school did u????

M-Eazy 03-21-05 08:28 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

i THINK CALI TOOK THIS ONE............................................... ................................

M-Eazy 03-21-05 08:32 PM

Ight, didnt wanna waist my time, so i think cali took this one wit harder punches, and more preparation in this battle. I felt cali came more conistent, and harder overall., but i think you should work on ur personals. they were all landin right, and some were just plain dumb, also all those similies took yo flow off, and made ur verse kidna herbish. but other than that, i was feelin yo verse.
spek.
i dont think you made it a close battle. i htink you shuld work on wordplay and better vocab, and harder landin punches. I was feelin tha whole flow of ur verse, but thats about it. shit was just aight to me, but i think cali got u.,..,

overall vote goes to cali

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Germ 03-21-05 08:38 PM

This was feedback posted for Spektikul
 
word to both verses.....should be close....cali gets punches.....spek gets personals......

Spektikul 03-22-05 01:05 AM

Upping...honest votes returned...

Spektikul 03-22-05 12:25 PM

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn............................

Ma$fit 03-22-05 01:20 PM

Voted For: Spektikul

dis battle is hilarious and a real close one...i'll jus explain tha best/worst lines...here ya go

spek:
best..."This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute
Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute
Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border
He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order"
^^^too fuckin funny...great use of wordplay and structure 4real

worst..."Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it
Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it"
^^^seemed like it was forced...and it was a played line outta nowhere cuz tha rest is typically original

cali:
best..."Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard
You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'......call me the chessmaster!!"
^^^perfect ass closer...even tho tha structure of it threw me off

worst..."Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small package
Big things in small sizes.......ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness"
^^^was iight but there u go again wit dat space and shit

opener: spek
closer: cali
structure: spek
vocab: -tied-
punches: spek
personals: spek

overall...my vote goes to spek...it was a good ass battle though...pz

-DB

Spektikul 03-22-05 11:57 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Spektikul 03-23-05 12:05 PM

Upping......................


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