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Voted For: GlocKoma
very close battle glockoma I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup... "Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... liked ur punches and word choice good personals iight structure elevate a lil more 8/10 kesse you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth feelin ur punches as well not as much personals doe word on enhancin vocab elevate so more no hate 7/10 my v/ glockoma ay yall check out ma battle verse the kid 523 i think i posted a nice verse letz c what yal think we need sum votes so leave good feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler holla back! |
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This was feedback posted for Kesse
I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]... eee...I dono, just nothing really special... seems like you're not trying hard enuff....yup/up/tie-up? 3/10 - ouch... Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick... Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It... See now that was alright, but still too basic. - 5/10 Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static... "Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It... damn....i just dont get it? sorry man, maybe you're just too complex i dono? - 3.5/10 I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped... Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped... You didnt really tell us what you're name says... I mean it doesnt say spunn-popped at all.....??? Sorry man, still not gettin'r, mabe next line......... - 3/10 For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips... You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... - 4/10 Uhm - ok i spose... I think you can elevate if you tried a little bit harder? I Dono, sorry man = just not feelin this one. Better luck next time *18.5/50. you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums 6/10 - Kinda good I guess...nothin speshl your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease 7/10 - Good punch still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name 7/10 - Bringin out a lil' tech in yea i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth - 8/10 that was a sucker punch...he didnt see that one comin...then again, its just to easy to rip on a name like that. Still good though. *28/49 * Good Drop kesse...I think you'll prolly take this one. |
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