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This was feedback posted for Chaos
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
Chaos- you got a fucked up rhyme scheeme "My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors....." if ya said that shit into a mic you'd sound like a fool. I thought this line was clever even though Im not a big fan of gun talk "I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10....." A bit too much gangsta talk but not too bad.
Buck-a-shot- Wasn't liking this verse bit boring lacked complexity structure, flow and rhyme scheeme where ok. Not much to say bout this verse Overall- Chaos won Oh well I cant vote just typed all that shit for nothing It would be nice if you returned the favor anyway. plz http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182374 |
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Voted For: Buck.Shot
choas your stucutre really was weak, your punchlines were very good tho, not so many personals but a few that i liked, what you lack on is creativty, i wasnt seeing to much nice creative stuff in there, n the syllable count wasnt there somtimes..but not bad Esco uh not sure who you are o yea arent you buck shot hmm, anyway shit that was good nice stucuture, nice syllable count, good punchlines alot of creativty, im liking that, pretty good shit, the punches were what got you the win tho..pz RTF in my battle vs drama queen links in the sig pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
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damnit, couldnt u have just dropped a vote????????
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
omg, gotta say Chaos took this, lines was stretched as shyt, but tha punches were funny as hell
Buck Shot, ya came pretty decent jus that tha punches werent as creative, didnt see too many personals from either side, chaos also came decent w/ tha multies, altho that 1st line didnt really make sense damn, just realized i cant even vote RTF, links in sig |
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