Voted For: Red Bull

Tony Green-nice drop you are good at topicals. you had a nice verse. your wordplay was alright. you had somewhat of a messy rhyme scheme. though.. but over all i thought that you really put some effort into this. you had nice imagery and emotion which is good. you had alot of metaphors in your drop which was good. i just think you could work on vocab and structure a little more ... no hate i was feel'n ya drop

Red Bull- wow i think your drop is one of my favorites ever. your story line was amazing i thought you really expressed yourself on this one. there is alot of emotion in it. i could imagine the feeling in this. this was a really good drop you took this to a new level. ok you had really good wordplay ... perfect.. it was just reading this i thought that the reader could relate to it .your rhyme scheme was on target the whole way through and your flow was just off the hook. i hate jumping on your balls like this but this is really a good drop. i suggest you turn this into a song or record this because this is some real talent..

i'm gonna give you my vote because you just brought it to a new level. tony green you dropped hot but it can't compare to RB .his just had to much emotion and honesty in it


nO HATe

Vote//Red Bull

return the favor and drop a honest vote on my first topical link is in the sig

iight Tony Green uppin once more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^ Thanks for the vote man, the feedback made me feel good. Hahaha, anyways upping for some more explained votes.

Yeup....................................Vote Fuck.

Your hella wack Red. And tell Kesse to get your dick out his mouth. He's wack. And kesse, i have challenged him the right way, in both Bitchslapps, and i only got the response from some fag nigga name spektikul thats reppin tha same crew as yall fags are. And you are battlin regular, Red you BITCH! on ya other name, but i dont want your other name. You know what, your wack, fuck it, I aint even guna waist my time callin you out. Fuck you!

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LOL so this is the "real vet' you have to battle, LOL you have no respect from anyone, LOL your a fucking looser, LOL
uppin this shit, and checking polls

Upping.........................................com e on people vote...both verses were hot.

Voted For: Red Bull

aight this was kinda wack battle but kinda onesided as you may already know,

RED, decent shit, could have been a lil shorter, like 15 lines shorter, and your lines where kinda stretched thats why your font is so small, but other than that, this was a str8 topcal abttle considering its your first one, but you need a lot of elevating to do, just keep battling alot more topical poeple, i discredit the fact you battled a newb, and plus hes in NOK which automaitcally means he sucks, so other than those minor things , this was a bad batle but good verse from you

tony, you are not that good, you need to elevate alot, try to battle people with less wins and then elevate alot, LOL you need to find a dictionary and lok up words, becuase your vocab was kinda weak, you also needed to fix your structure and shit, you also could have re-worded alot of your lines to make them sound and be alopt more better, you could have also used alot more emotion, other than that, elevate,

this was a wack battle becuase it was one sided, redbull your new to topicals but you still should have battled someone better

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^ Aight.........Thanks for the vote/feedback. Uppin for more vote.

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sup red.......you're not online.....so i'll up this for you :)