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This was feedback posted for skriptz
 

Weak battle...both verses sucked...checkin polls...

^fuck outta here kiddo...

This was feedback posted for skriptz
 

nice.............................................. ..

Voted For: skriptz

Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
6/10...decent opening line
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
5/10..alright bar, not the greatest though
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
6/10...cool punch, kinda played though
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
5/10...didnt like the closer

I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
6/10...2nd line was good
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
6/10..cool punches
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
4/10...wasnt feelin it
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
5/10...okay closer

okay i liked the way skaal ryhemed each line with the same sound, he also had good multies...skriptz i liked your punches and opener and structure and shit...here is the breakdown

opener:skriptz
closer: skaal
multies:skaal
flow:tie
vocab:tie
structure:skriptz
punches/werdplay:skriptz
personals:tie
nice battle

v/skriptz

rtf on any of my battles

Voted For: skriptz

Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
Eh....ok....
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
Eh......
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
nice....
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
nah......

I know it was a quick scrip, but closer was eh...


I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
not feeling the loose-loose rhyme
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
eh.......ok movie.....ok punch..
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
bleh........
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
ok closer...

Skaal didn't have enough substance to close it out for him, skriptz had some decent rhymes, so I'll throw my vote to scripts for the checked in line...

...........uppin

Voted For: skriptz

SKAAL

I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
^good opener

On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
^nice bar

Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
^coo coo

Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............
^okay closer

Overall good verse, had nice wordplay in there for sure and you had your flow as well as structure and vocab on lock. Only thing I'm kinda missing are the hardhitting personals, the punches were okay but not extremly bold, you made up for that with your wordplay though. Just get go for hard personals and keep the hot wordplay up, no hate...


Skriptz

Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
^haha, nice opener

Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
^coo coo

Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
hehe, good one

I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you
^no no at rhyming with same word but closer was okay

Nice verse with good punches, especially the first bar...made me laugh for sec there, funny shit. Nothing too special though but you got cool punches, not too many personals though. Vocab was good and I was feeling your flow, structure was cool as well. You didn't bring your top game though and yet you win this battle due to more hardhitting punches.