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Voted For: Evolution

Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
^^concepts really played evo....u know that...lol
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
^^weak n simple fam
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
^^ya vowel count was off..killed tha flow
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
^^best line n it was eh.............
nothin really stood out cept ya closer........shouldve gotten more personal or something in this man........weak verse
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Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
^^the link was weak(fake personal in my opinion)
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
^^it shouldve been "seem" great...in this context its not even a direct punch to your opponent
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
^^lmao, nah...kiddo...ASK YA MOMS...LOL..THIS IS ALL WRONG
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
^^WEAKL CLOSER.
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well i thought for sure you had this but you came really weak in this compared to the last battle i just read of yours..
i gotta go with evo on this..even though i didnt even like his verse either............guys gotta bring it harder than this in the future..this was some weak shit
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RTF if ya want.......

Voted For: Tstorm

T Storm took this battle
Storm
Good punches and a couple aight personals...
there were no multies or any outstanding rhymes but the punchlines got this for you...
i liked the grate line, the period line and the evolve line. those were all pretty hot and made ur verse stand out better...

Evolution
your verse was very basic... there were no real punchlines except maybe for the last one... if that was a punch, then it was really weak... but anyways,there was nothing special at all about your verse so it feel short to Storm's.

V/ T STorm
RTF!!!
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184736

Voted For: Tstorm

Flow: Blah
Punches: Storm
Personals: Storm
Wordplay: Storm
Metas: Tie
Multis: Blah
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Storm

Explanation: Storm Got This He Came More Personal And Out Weighed Everything Evo Could Throw At Him

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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184957
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185213
return the favor plz both of you and vote on my battles honestly

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Voted For: Tstorm

both were played out....didnt enjoy the battle dat much.....Going with Tstorm because his rhymes a are lil unique......butother than that da battle was wack

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fuck.
god.
piss.
cock,,,,,,,,,,,,,,anyone know how to fucking vote?..

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Voted For: Tstorm

pretty disappointed in both you guys...no hate...

tstorm...ya used the whole "lacking" thing in back to back lines....makes it seem like ya couldn't find any other ideas to dis him...the "gutter/grate" line has been used b4 and yours was the worst use of it i've seen so far... the period line is played... ya closer was ya best line... good play on his name... prolly done b4 but i never saw it... so good one.

evolve...

where's ya personals? this was a basic drop that coulda been spit at anyone on RV... the whole thing was filler.. no dope lines...the only thing ya did good was predict that Tstorm was gonna use some played lines... that's the only thing i can really give you points for... ya verse bored me almost to tears...

T...consider yaself lucky... if he had even one or two good lines in his verse you woulda lost... you came wack... but evolve was worse.

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Voted For: Tstorm

Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
7...gud shit with the link to as proof!!
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
7...nice meta, gud shit!!!
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
8...LMAO!!! this was some funny shit!!
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
8...hot closer!! best example of self-glorifyin i ever seen!!

OVERALL: 30/40

Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
5...bleh!!! them lines are kinda gay!!
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
5...bleh again!! not feelin the 2nd line!!
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
6...better but still ya just puttin in filler!!
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
6...nice attempt at a punch but u didnt pull it off rite!!

OVERALL: 22/40

Tstorm gets this for consistency, harder hittin punches cuz evolution dropped them weak lines at the start and to finish he wasn't that gud either. need to elevate ya shit and stop with the filler lines evolution, tstorm work on makin ya punches a bit more hard hittin!!!

V/ - Tstorm

RTF!!! on one of my battles!! links in siggy!!!!

Voted For: Tstorm

um im actually gonna have to go wit Tstorm on this one. he just came harder than evolution. he actually had some punches in there and somewhat decent wordplay in his verse. Evo wasn't really talkin about anything in his verse this time. Tstorm hadbetter punches, i especially like the line wit "only time you'll see "grate". that was the best bar in the battle which really gave t-storm some points. but also his flow was good and he had a wittier verse.Evolution didnt' really come hard at his opponent like you should in a battle. his flow and structure were decent but he wasn't thorough enuff to take the W in this one. HOLL BACK AT ME links are in the SIG...1..