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sdizzle 03-31-05 12:41 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MaRVJay1009
whut?...its 4-2...memisis and flow r da only votes u got...wet willy didn't even vote


lol

u have no say on what votes count

dont u understand that?

4-4 playboy

MaRVJay 03-31-05 03:56 PM

and u have no say fagget...4-2.....4 ppl didn't even vote 4 ya dumb ass..wet willy's was a comment

sdizzle 03-31-05 05:03 PM

lol

4-4

do u not understand

its by mere luck u even have 4 votes

so its a tie right now

4-4

FOUR - FOUR

and lol @ not counting wet willy cuz he didn't phyisically say v/

i dont say v/ sometimes..

ill just put the name

so fuck what u say, ur words carry no bearing at all

MaRVJay 03-31-05 05:09 PM

YO R U RETARDED??? LIKe SERIOUSLY......name da ppl dat voted 4 ya dumb ass??..wet willy*which dont count*...mimesis,flow intel datz it.....ass hole


4-2

~Luciano~ 03-31-05 08:40 PM

boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
......No

a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
NO!

quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
Um ok here i guess

kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
um...this was ok

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
nice personal

cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
Ok Punch

fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
One of ya best linez

u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....

The fuck was this?

this battle was kinda wack

but ima have 2 give it 2 Marv


























V/- MarvJ

TeamOne 03-31-05 08:54 PM

P-Q-R-S-Dizzle

boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
haha.... i liked this opener, had me crackin up
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
approximate rhyme is not that good, coulda been worded better with "funny symbols"
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
quote here, lol..... alil played, but aight
*does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch*

kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
really liked this line! even tho i sed somethin like this before, but that was in a topical track

Marv:

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
.... ehh ok opener, lil stretched and not hard-hittin
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
.....ok..... first line was an ok similie, but the punch wasnt very hard hittin again, yo momma shit has been played since before i was born...
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
this was ur only decent line to me, nice multies in it with a decen punch
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
wtf??? that was bad, no rhymin at all, woulda been decent if it was anywhere close to rhymin.... shoulda kept it at "no release".. bad closer lost u the battle

Decent battle...... but S-dizzle got this, opener and closer were both real nice for him, while ur weakest lines were ur opener and closer..... sdizzle squeaks by in my book.....

v/sdizzle

TeamOne 03-31-05 08:55 PM

damn... its 5-5...... goin down to the wire

New Meth0d 03-31-05 09:35 PM

wow i guess ome cats didnt get the wordplay of dizzles last line.......or they just stupid and cant recognize a good punch


quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it

vs. nothin of marv

please try and show some sort of creativity in ya verse
at least dizzle had some wittyness, honeslty i could have qouted sdizzles who verse in comparision to marvs. marv you gotta step up ya game or somethin......his personals were better, and his punches hit harder enough said. he just came harder

v/sdizzle

sdizzle 03-31-05 09:52 PM

its either 6-5 me

OR... OR

its 5-0 nothing, cuz aparently anyone who votes for me doesn't count

MaRVJay 04-01-05 12:28 AM

its 5-4......fam....wet willy's vote still doesn't count....new method im sorri i dissed u fam lol i knew u was gon find a way 2 pay me back

sdizzle 04-01-05 12:38 AM

by 5-4 u mean .... 5-4 me....

either 6-5 or 5-4

either way im winning

cuz honestly... it dont matter if u say a vote dont count, cuz it will count in the end...

unless u say before a battle... blah cant vote.... his vote will count

i could go in a battle and say v/ new methodz

^ and thats a valid vote

MaRVJay 04-01-05 01:29 AM

MY BADD..ITS 5-5 I DIDN'T c 9TH'S VOTE.....wet willy didn't even explain his shit if i would of got dat u wouldn't count it either...fam u need da wind at badd dat u'll except any vote

MaRVJay 04-01-05 01:35 AM

oh and let correct my bar i missed a word....

u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap tapes...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
^^^i missed 1 word wow....its funny tho dat i cant edit my post but he can.....

sdizzle 04-01-05 02:52 AM

i never edited my verse

New Meth0d 04-01-05 06:54 AM

don't you all just love rv, we got bitching, moaning, wineing. and MORE


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