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uppin.... im pretty sure the vote count is fucked up.....
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Voted For: Skriptz
You’re getting fooled all around… …like some1 did a magic-trick You say your punches are hard… …but they’re looking like shit 5...not feelin this...too basic!! Just leave RV…go on…just quit You wish you had a dope crew… …once newbs started leaving it 4...nah, this is weak yo!! Cut your tongue off… …spitting game is not your fame Comparing wackness to you… …there both the same 4...played concept, and basic vocabs still! Your styles & punches are wack… …and so are you & you’re only winning battles against newbs… …cuz I had voted for you 6...prolly ya best bar!!! OVERALL: 19/40 half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin, cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten', 0...BOOOO!!! no points for pre-writ lines!!! not from me anyway!!!! and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense, but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents, 4...ok i give you the 4 for the 2nd line, the 1st line referred to the previous pre-writ bar but this aint a pre-writ bar in general so you get some points!!! i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick, and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick, 6...decent meta, nice line!!! i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match, only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..* 7...decent closer, gud meta again!!! OVERALL: 17/40 ok i am honestly shocked.......pre-written shit is soooooo gay and if anyone reads this know that i do not give points for direct pre-writ barz, they are gay!!!! the only reason i give this to skriptz is cuz he didnt drop no pre-writ lines...played concepts are gay but pre-writ shit is sumthin else!!!! don't do it kiddies!!!! V/ - Skriptz |
This was feedback posted for Skriptz
basic ass rhymes dude elevate your vocabulary just consrtuctive critisism no hate
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
v/ Onestepbeyond no not cuz of scriptz structure......onestep had a better all around verse.......both were kinda weak.......but it looks like scriptz ain really try hard on purpose.......lacked creativity, no punches, blah personals, wordplay was aight........onestep's wasnt much betta but his lines hit harder than scriptz OPENER: scriptz MIDDLE: beyond CLOSER: scriptz return da favor......{me vs. tycoon, diman, ovdose, verbal, freestyle-king, etc.} ne one... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
You’re getting fooled all around… …like some1 did a magic-trick You say your punches are hard… …but they’re looking like shit Eh.......unoriginal.... Just leave RV…go on…just quit You wish you had a dope crew… …once newbs started leaving it Eh.......... Cut your tongue off… …spitting game is not your fame Comparing wackness to you… …there both the same ok.......... Your styles & punches are wack… …and so are you & you’re only winning battles against newbs… …cuz I had voted for you ok closer....... half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin, cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten', ok......... and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense, but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents, good..... i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick, and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick, good..... i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match, only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..* nice closer... OSB had a great closer, more control of his verses, even addressing his played line and turning it into a rejoinder/set-up for the next verse. Better punches on his half. Skriptz, OK spit, it would take out most herb verses, but against a spit with complexity and decent punches, it really doesn't hold any ground. Not bad, just not enough weight behind the punches, and some were kind of played. RTF |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
I think that OneStepBeyond got this battle because i feel that OneStepBeyond came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt OneStepBeyond got it was effective and was on point Skriptz you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to OneStepBeyond good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to OneStepBeyond and flow and structure i'll give to OneStepBeyond. V/OneStepBeyond RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Skriptz
Skriptz....... You’re getting fooled all around… …like some1 did a magic-trick You say your punches are hard… …but they’re looking like shit Decent...hit ok...nothin special....4/10 Just leave RV…go on…just quit You wish you had a dope crew… …once newbs started leaving it decent personal here...6/10 Cut your tongue off… …spitting game is not your fame Comparing wackness to you… …there both the same nice...5/10 Your styles & punches are wack… …and so are you & you’re only winning battles against newbs… …cuz I had voted for you 6/10 overall.......21/40 OSB........... half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin, cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten', kinda played on the skriptz thing...3/10 and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense, but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents, i liked this....6/10 i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick, and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick, ok...4/10 i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match, only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..* liked it....6/10 overall.....19/40 |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
votin for One one gets my vote due to harder punches and more creative use of multies One ya punches were nice and hard hittin and very creative ya had a hot flow with a nicely layed out structure ya wordplay and personals were tight as well didnt see many multies though try to get them in ur verse man Skripts ya punches wernt as strong as they should have been n your personals well i didnt even see any worth menting you had a good flow but it was made easy due to ur structure set up didnt see any multies u didnt come as hard as u usually do vote goes to One better punches, creative wordplay be SURE TO RTF battle link below sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
wow both came pretty weak on this but i think onestep edges it with a tad bit harder punches... the flow was off at points for both but hey this is text.. structure was even.. also personals go to onestep.... sooo all in all one step just had harder punches and personals.. and thats what gave him the edge in this battle.. skriptz if u woulda just came a bit harder.. i could have seen u taking this.. |
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