Voted For: Kesse

ohhh. this was a good battle. its about time. i was feeling kesses more though. this was close. ima break it down.
kesse-u had good structure, very clean type verse, and everything seemed in place. yo verse flowed well together. funny, good diss personals. some goood punches, and mettas. i was feelin tha opener, but the closer was a lil weak to me, but in between was dope. (the body). i was feeling ur verse.
marv-u had good structure, but ur verse just seemed messy and poorly organized. just look at it and tell. good diss personals, but not as strong as kesse i think. better punches, but lightweight on the mettas. ur opener was soft so was ur closer, but i was feeling yo body also. wordplay was also decent in this one.
overall-i think kesse took it by a hair in my vote. just came out harder, and dissed marv better...

v/kesse

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thats because that dude is a queer faggot....and so is picture perfect....queer ass, thats why you have 20 losses.....marv man, you were on the roster like 2 days before his vote, thats just rules man....uppin

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

Chekkin the polls nice battle ya'll

Would vote but kesse in da crew

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Just checking this out.....................hot battle

damm we got 3 pages already and no votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aight u got 2 b retarded if u think marv lost dis nigga had betta punches his shit was eazy 2 read he had mad ill wordplay in his verse all his lines followed each other nigga just all out killed dis nut

kesse shit was basic he had sum aight punches nothin sikk he shit was eazy 2 read had some wordplay not like marv verse but i he had sum he aint have no sikk personals like marv dey was basic

marv took dis cuz he came harder n he put more effort n 2 hiz punches

Voted For: MaRVJay1009



what kinda name is marvjay1009, pretty damn whack, but thats a given
but it seems hes also gay, having a fetish for guys ending in simmmons
^^weak opener kesse...
why you living, its like the intelligent switch is turned off in his brain
its insane... marvs more drawn to spelling errors, than a moth to a flame
^^not hitting hard at all
americas nightmare?, some scare, threating people with skill you never had
people arent afraid cause youre dangerous, your whackness is just that bad
^^decent but simple
you must be mad, all cussin' and sad...youre thinking this was a mistake
but too late, im stealing this battle, you can do nothing but fist shake
^^flow fell off.....
you dont have what it takes, so you trash herbs, like a scolding gardener
we know youre fake, and couldnt strike rich, if he was your bowling partner
^^wasnt feeling it
a win, i know you want'er, but keep hunting newbs, for you thats fair game
cause the closest you'll be to big on 'RV'... is the capitals in your name
^^decent...but not enough ta make up for the other bars...
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i'll have ya body missin,y dis guy-keep-spittin?,dont say dat i-be-trippin
you suck kesse aint shit without dat "RED BULL" like "scottie pipen"
^^good flow....good opener n personal
'kesse is dope' datz whut a FEW say,but i honestly i think you gay
i took a trip 2 CaNaDa & like "toronto" kesse mother "BLEW-Jay"
^^ohhh damn...lol..i liked that...lol
dont believe nun of dis guy lines,u'll still be on RV when im signed
pickin on newbie's,its sad you battled Armada Da 187 5 TiMES!
^^lol,nice jay
i hope u gain a lesson...you cant rap dogg change profession's
u give ppl "RV $" 2 vote 4 you other wise they wont "Pay attention"
^^ehh.......not really feeling it
5-0 me afta our verses drop..herb just stop! u like virgin cock
the establishment had 3 battles & da only 1 u were in was V.S NOK..LOL
^^ouch........
he cant freestyle ya bar's r pre written gota write? fam damm
afta i kill you red bull gon be sad he "lose touch" w/ his "right hand" man
^^closer fell off..but it was still decent.
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to me this was way one sided...kesse you got merked by personals kiddo,jay 2 dope bars..n only 2 bars i wasnt feeling...nice job...better then ive seen from you in the past
kesse...none of ya punches was hittin man....
but hionestly you wouldve been hard pressed to beat that verse on a good day.....
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RTF.........IN THE SIG

wow 2 votes datz whuts up

yes....and that is cool.............i kinda feel my verse sucks ass now, haha, but i have a problem that everyone is diggin your toronto line, when that wasnt really a diss towards me, haha, uppin

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i'll have ya body missin,y dis guy-keep-spittin?,dont say dat i-be-trippin
you suck kesse aint shit without dat "RED BULL" like "scottie pipen"
7...nice opener, gud wordplay!!
'kesse is dope' datz whut a FEW say,but i honestly i think you gay
i took a trip 2 CaNaDa & like "toronto" kesse mother "BLEW-Jay"
7...funny shit!!! 1st line was weak, 2nd line dope!!
dont believe nun of dis guy lines,u'll still be on RV when im signed
pickin on newbie's,its sad you battled Armada Da 187 5 TiMES!
9...funny shit, nice personal!! LMFAO!!!
i hope u gain a lesson...you cant rap dogg change profession's
u give ppl "RV $" 2 vote 4 you other wise they wont "Pay attention"
8...hot, nice shit with the money...clever!!
5-0 me afta our verses drop..herb just stop! u like virgin cock
the establishment had 3 battles & da only 1 u were in was V.S NOK..LOL
7...shit was funny again!!
he cant freestyle ya bar's r pre written gota write? fam damm
afta i kill you red bull gon be sad he "lose touch" w/ his "right hand" man
6...average. 1st line was kinda played!!

OVERALL: 44/60


what kinda name is marvjay1009, pretty damn whack, but thats a given
but it seems hes also gay, having a fetish for guys ending in simmmons
6...ok. gay shit is played, only works now if u make it funny!!
why you living, its like the intelligent switch is turned off in his brain
its insane... marvs more drawn to spelling errors, than a moth to a flame
7...better, gud meta!!
americas nightmare?, some scare, threating people with skill you never had
people arent afraid cause youre dangerous, your whackness is just that bad
7...pretty gud, cud've been done better.
you must be mad, all cussin' and sad...youre thinking this was a mistake
but too late, im stealing this battle, you can do nothing but fist shake
6...weak, mainly just filler!
you dont have what it takes, so you trash herbs, like a scolding gardener
we know youre fake, and couldnt strike rich, if he was your bowling partner
7...nice line, gud meta again!!
a win, i know you want'er, but keep hunting newbs, for you thats fair game
cause the closest you'll be to big on 'RV'... is the capitals in your name
7...2nd line been done before but still ok.

OVERALL: 40/60

ok battle. marv took this for me cuz he had less played concepts, his punches were hittin harder, better wordplay and personals and overall his verse was just a lot more enjoyable, lotta lines had me laughin like fuck!!

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