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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
5...weak man. 1st line was filler and 2nd was stretched to fuck!!
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
6...nice metas..aight line!!
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
6...first line was dope, 2nd was kinda wack!!
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
5...weak closer!!

OVERALL: 22/40


Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
6...aight personal but cud've been better!!
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
7...dope line, obituary shit was clever!!
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
5...not feelin it!!
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
7...nice meta and shit, dope closer!!

OVERALL:25/40

aight pretty average battle here, both didnt really drop anythin real hot!!! i think murcinal came better cuz some of pandemoniums shit was just filler and stretched.......murcinal had a couple of dope personals in there and that "obituary" line was fuckin clever and hot!!!!

V/ - Murcinal

RTF!!!!! links in siggy.....although don't hit the Daz battle cuz he aint dropped yet!!!!! thnx!!!!

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Voted For: Pandemonium

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
weak opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ok, decent
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
nope
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
nope

overall u had a weak drop, those punches weren’t all that hard
hittin, I’ve seen better from u Murc, but overall you need to come
more harder than that next time though.. 5/10

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
wack opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
decent
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
avg punch here
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ur best line yet

overall u had an aight drop, ur punches were pretty decent
but could’ve been better though.. ur structure was decent &
ur flow was average.. but overall ur closer took this one for you
6/10

RTF ON ONE OF MY BATTLES PANDEMONIUM

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Voted For: Pandemonium

Pandemonium- you had a very strong verse i just didn't like your structure. but besides that everything else was on key you had a average opener and a sorta weak closer but you had alot of really good metaphors with some mediocre wordplay but overall i just thought your verse had a better flow and went over smooth when saying out loud.

murcinal i- i liked your verse as well but i don't think it was as hard as pands you had some good wordplay and all but besides that i just thought it was a little to basic and lacked creativity . your rhyme scheme was't bad ... but then again it wasnt amazing .. either way i liked your verse because it had a few nice lines...

props to both of you

Vote//Pand

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
no!.......
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ummm no!
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
coo......
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
better!

overal an ok verse nothing really great.....only 2 lines were even deicent.......


Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
no!
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
NO!
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
umm...the first line was better...should switched it around
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ummmm....NO!

not good at all..........



neither verse was good they both sucked.......so yall need to improve alot......

v/Oz

Voted For: MuRcInAl

return the favor Please

ehhh i wasnt feelin this battle too much, seemed kinda half assed from both of u. but i think Oz just edged it out cuz his punches contained personals, nah mean. yall both need to work on ya flows tho, it made ya drops difficult to read.

pandemonium=u had some potential in ya verse but u didnt follow through with it, i kept waitin for it to get better but it just stayed the same, plus clown and ounce dont rhyme, thats a stretch for ya opener
Pandemoniums best bar=
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^i liked this bar right here, nice set up n good delivery

Oz=ur drop was decent, work on ya flow and the set up of ya punches tho. and add some multies too.
Oz's best bar=
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^i was gonna vote for pandemonium until i read this bar, i think this one just edged it out for u

overall=oz takes this shit cuz his punches had personals so they just hit harder
RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE, links are in the sig