Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Ya verse is crazy funny yo. Creative,flowed good...what more can i say.

Opener-OSB..."plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,"....U GOT RIGHT DOWN TO DISSIN THE OTHA EMCEE

Punches-OBS...u had some creative and funny ass punches...thats what i like ta see,and basickally u came off better

Vocab-Tie...both emcee's vocab was basic,so u both tied in this category

Multis-OSB...had this category down packed on each bar.Hint tho try seperatin ya multis wit a dash afta each word so peeps can spot em better.

Closer-OSB...this is obvious,but i give this ta u because u put more effort in it.................

overall 7/10 good job to both emcees,but OSB gets my vote due to more creativity and time put into it from what i see

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,

7/10...nice punch but the 1st line was wack

doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches,
got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES,

8/10...nice both punches were very good and had nice werdplay

your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see,
cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me,

6/10...eehh, okay personal i guess

your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug,
and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up,

6/10...eeehhh

wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls,
M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes,

6/10...lmao, thats all i gotta say

i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s,
cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex...

6/10...decent closer
39/60


Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug
I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs

6/10...2nd line was okay, 1st was wack

Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch
Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch"

6/10...kinda played but you did it originally, sort of

Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision
My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision

4/10...eehh

You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie
Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie

6/10..lol, but not that great

We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously
Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity

6/10...didnt rhyme well

Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit
So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it

4/10..eeehhh
32/10

onestep took this withotu a doubt...better verse in about every category...

RTF