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YuNG TiLT 04-17-05 03:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 9th Degree
WTF? Why does J Dot even have 1 vote? "9 degree is cold" lines are played as fuck, been used against me in damn near every battle. Gay lines...don't even get me started on the gay lines. And self-glory is crap also.

That wasn't even my closer, dumbshit.


I feel u, wen my name was Woody i always got refered to tha toy from tha movie, it got annoying and played quick, but it seemd that everyone was likin them...i guess if it sounds good or makes sense, d/rs and newbs feed of that shit...

so basically, i feel where ur coming from[/COLOR]

TeamOne 04-17-05 08:01 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
weak rhymin..... second line stretched..... arent we feelin alil newbish today
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
he rides ur dick in a circular motion? lol, huh???? bar was ok, but if all u meant was that people ride dicks and ferris wheels, than it was kinda wack...
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
hah, this was decent...... u gotta lay off the one syllable rhymin tho
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
haha, prolly ur best bar, but it wasnt that good
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
yea..... hmmmmmmm...... i dont know wat to say about this line
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
ok multies..... but 50 cent can come up with this type of line... not a good closer at all in my eye.... would be ok in the middle of the verse, but not here

9th Degree:

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
haha.... this was kinda funny, but almost glorifyin him.... u should sed "ONLY cuz u talk"
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
good multies, but not a very good punch
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
hah.... ok line, alteast made more sense than alotta J's line
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
OMGOMGOMGOMG..... killed the battle right there!!! lol, this won u it hands down to me
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine
you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
haha, this was really creative and funny, lol
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
hahah..... alot better closer, HAH

in alll i think this was a onesided battle...... J came really elementary and PLAYed in alotta aspects...... 9th had one or two bad lines, but besides that KIlled J on his last 3 bars.....

v/9th Degree

.Poetic. 04-17-05 11:42 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
Polls...

9th Degree had the better verse in this..

M-Eazy 04-18-05 12:24 AM

9th Degree got the biggest supply of D/R this site has ever seen. And yo bitch ass cant say you don't. Look how quickly this slept battle got so many votes all for you. Red, you can't vote in this one. Fux, that's a hate vote, and I meant to blacklist you a while back you homo slut. But, I ain't even trippin off this shit.

Oz™ 04-18-05 01:34 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

one sided..but i guess i'll break it down anyways......

J-Dot:

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
lol..good opener..good play off his name..bad structure tho...8/10
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
blah..want feelin that to much...4/10
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
decent...6/10
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
that was str8..........7.5/10
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
decent..heard punches like that before..5/10
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
good closer...8/10

overall-38.5/60

9th Degree:

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
lol....good opener...9/10...very creative
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
Decent...6/10
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
lol...that was crazy...9/10
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
nice personal....8/10
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine
you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
decent...7/10
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
Average closer..heard bars like this before..6/10

Overall-45/60

Vote-9th Degree

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Nynth Degree 04-19-05 07:31 PM

Lol guess this shit got re-opened. Uppin' for votes.

M-Eazy 04-19-05 10:04 PM

Sad how you turned everyone against me on a internet site. I thought we were coo. uppin this shit.

Ryan Hughes 04-20-05 12:18 PM

Voted For: J DOT

V/J Dot.......this was a good battle by both.....9th came wit some good lines the jay....z one was hot but u came to lightly in ur openin sentences u had sum played punchs that weren't that creative in the beggin but at the end u came wit some fire but it was enough to me for the win....J dot came wit strong punchs that consistently hit an he had good personals an vocab wit structure that was on point....NO HATE......RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=J
Closer=9th
Structure=TIe
Punchs=J
Vocab=J
Personals=J
Multi's=Tie(Not many)
Overall=J DOT

Adrenaline 04-20-05 12:52 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

I like this battle...good battle good battle...

9 had the "Oh" factor with the sleepin line...that was nice...

jdot came hard but Im not voting just giving some feed...

keep it up both...im so bored I dont even think i'll vote...lol

Vote removed

Adrenaline 04-20-05 01:01 PM

my bad that was feedback...... remove that...

Nynth Degree 04-21-05 03:55 PM

Dot we were cool. It's just that you failed to admit that someone voted unexplained for you, insisted you beat me because the wack vote gave you the 3-0 KO, and overall accused me of cheating. Other than that I never had any problem with you :thumbup:.

Dirty Nigga 04-21-05 04:10 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

LOL..
Nice battle...

9th:
Decent verse, disses were on point, flow was strong, personals an punches are original, creative an hard hittin...
that welfare office line is sick, prolly the highlight of the battle...

an also you mentioned about him bein an JayZ D/R...lol, he used roc-afella in this battle, so lucky fa you that diss had more effect also
7.5/10

J:
Dope verse, nice wordplay on lines like ''100 gay dudes in a crowd an 9th would still stand out''...nice line...ya lacked the personals that 9th had, an your punchlines in places were a little too basic where as 9th remained on point an consistant throughout...

vote/9th

RTF Both yall, 9th check out my battle with J-Dot...an J check out my battle with Supervillain or Effect...drop an honest well explained an..
be sure than yall do too :thumbup:

Peace out, stay up yall

Oz™ 04-21-05 04:31 PM

lol @ j-dot removin my vote...............good bitch move

M-Eazy 04-21-05 08:25 PM

^Lol at me not getting your vote taken off. When you tell them about unexplained votes, they take em all off idiot. 9th, I did tell them to take off the unexplained votes at the beginning of this battle. I can't remember where I posted it, or I probably sent it thru PM, but I know for a fact that I asked them to take off the first 2 or 3 votes. (honest). I did beat you, and I was going to get it closed, but then the unexplained vote by 20 got this battle to keep going, and I never accused you were cheating, I suspected that you had D/R...that should clear everything up, cause I really have no beef with you.

uppin

K.ontroverz.Y 04-22-05 07:39 AM

Voted For: 9th Degree

jea mayn 9th got this.

punches was hard. from both sides. j dot's gettin better but still doesnt match up to 9th's punches. also 9th had a good personal that made me laugh. and had good vocab creativity and Wordplay.

best line:
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period

J dot:

your shit was koo. 9th outshined you in everything though

bestline:
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still

vote 9th


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