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This was feedback posted for Stanza
Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate
Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight” No, played.. He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it No.....................no..............no......... . Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered Eh Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game Terrible............ Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run Eh... Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT Alright... Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain OK punch.. Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask Flow was better than the punch.. This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting Good... feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back The lost is to bad jus leave .bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back" Eh closer... 532, wasn't feeling the spit, too simplistic, plus I really don't dig mainstream rap references, plus your lines could have really used some beefing up because they were too flimsy to be effective Stanza, good spits, all punches, 2 were a little weak, but the rest were solid....try incoprorating some more personals, but if that ain't your game, just stick with the punches... |
This was feedback posted for Stanza
Flow - I wasnt really feeling either flow, the lines seemed too short
Punches - Nothing spectacular but stanza's last two bars were alright Personals - D had more personals but none of them really hit hard. Multies - tied because they both had a bar with words rhyming with "shit" Vocab - both werent very good, elevate Originality - a lot of both of your verses were played but d came more original...just not hard hitting. Water/flow is hella played and so are "heavy/lightweight" lines but overall Stanza won this because he had a couple decent punches at the end and i didnt feel D had anything to compete with them |
Voted For: Stanza
Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight” ^^ok opener........... He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it ^^nah, weak, no punch Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered ^^??....doesnt make sense........ Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game ^^weak punch............ Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run* ^^ok but not a good closer overall your drop was simple, work on using some wordplay n gettin more complex, also try n use some nameplays for personals......... . Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT ^^nah, bad opener Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain ^^good use of his name, the punch was good Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask ^^decent concept, ok punch This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting ^^boarderline glorification feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back The lost is to bad jus leave .bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back" ^^nah, weak closer . overall im gonna go with stanza, he had one punch that connected but both of you hafta up your verses content try using wordplay n more metas n personal......... a rather weak battle |
Thanx Mayne ................I Wish I Could RTF But You Have a Battle With Someone in my crew so I Cant vote in that But Thanx for the vote
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Voted For: Stanza
Watch Me Spit this heavenly shit so Heavely Sick you never can never get in my ass with Yo Lyrical SHIT 6/10..nice opener Im Crushin "The Kid" Like "523" times and countin D couldnt flow if he came out of a Water Fountain 6/10, kinda played bu you made it iight Do you smell that fire?....,..Watch me extinguish Him fast so When the ppl come to vote they gone need oxygen mask 5/10...wasnt feelin it This Dude Alligator rappin The way he always bitting D Saw I was Above his game & reported a UFO siting 7/10...nice punches feel like U leaning on nail beds tha way im stabbing ya back The lost is to bad jus leave .bcuz now "Mase" wouldnt "welcome you back" 6/10 decent closer Battling me, Stanza’s going to have an early fate Thinkin he a “heavy” threat, but he only “light weight” 5/10...attempted but you didnt get this werdplay quite right He thinks he’s legit, talking all the shit he spits But that’s not the mic that’s my dick get up off it 5/10...wack Thinking that you’re a big shot cause you can use curse words I’d spit some personals at you, but your not even registered 6/10...decent Your whole flow is wack, matter of fact, everything about you is a shame Your from West Coast, call me 50 and ill turn my back on u like u Game 5/10..shoodve approached it differently Stanza, face the facts kid, you’ve just been outdone I won before the verse was written, consider this your final run* 6/10...decent closer sry d523 for voting against you again lol.but ne ways, stanza won this because he had better punches...d523 elevate a lil bit and think about your verses more before you post them and i guarantee youll have more win ;) v/stanza rtf |
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