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Come on yall...Uppin for some goddamn votes!!!!!!!

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

BM:

Ya squad is weak, I'll rip you apart with speech
Watch this gay chump, get "raked up" like "autumn leaves"
^^nice bar 8/10
Don't start with me, you garbage dude!
Ya flow is rookie, now watch me "expose this pussy" like "prostitutes" *
^^good meta stretched 2nd line 5/10
It aint a fable you wack kid, I'll leave you unable to back-bend
After I'm thru clappin "shots at ya dish" like "cable assasins" **
^^woah fire 10/10
You'll get destroyed, Black~Magik is hot, this faggot is not
So I'll put this "jack in a box" like a "childrens toy" ***
^^nice shit 7/10
Aint Nobody matchin me, especially this actress queen
face it, ya flows couldn't "bounce back" with "matress springs"
^^dam nice 8/10
I'll attack his spleen, cock and bust, let the shots erupt
And leave his whole body with "no lid" like "topless cups"
^^lmao 8/10
When I'm 'squeezin the tech', I'm easily bringing 'heat to ya chest'
Plus I'll "shove my nikes up your ass" just to "keep it in check" ****
^^played 3/10
I'm Godly ho, stay "packin heat" like "Dominoes" *****
Damn dawg, all I need is a "tampon" to "stop your flow" ******
^^good bar 2nd line played 4/10
You're thru if you try me, look dawg, you losing is likely
And please, you couldn't "Be G" if you were that "group from the nineties" *******
^^ dope 8/10
Show respect to the guy, and if you question that I'm the best when I rhyme
Look dawg, you got shit "fucked up" like "sex in the sky!"
^^lol nice 8/10

Overall: 69/100 (69%)

Kesse:

fusion of color and witchcraft, you having a whack name is my only conclusion
'hip-hop's theme music'??? oh i get it, that must be part of the illusion
^^nice bar 7/10
a delusion? you can think whatever you want when my punches go through you
no confusion, you wont be winning this battle just cause your into voodoo
^^ehh 4/10
cause your not impressive at all...actually your skills are quite tragic
you aint putting on any show, cause B............... you just lack magic
^^nice 7/10
fact is, the way he stiffens men.... you could call him the human starch
cause only time hes droppin anythin golden, is if hes on top of the arch
^^decent meta 5/10
st.louis kid has skill? things must look different from a bird's eye view
how bout i ram this loss down your throat, and you can sing RV the blues
^^alot of metas here 8/10
what are you gunna do....stir up a potion with bat ears or warts of a toad
cause the only time your rhymes ever sound any good......are in morse code
^^decent 5/10
pms me asking for a 'challenge', so i know you musta prewritten your lines
i should be fine, cause for you its a challenge just to write decent rhymes
^^no 2/10
youll never hit any primes, always be some punk ass teen who just drops for fun
funny how your interests are rap and pussy....you aint familiar with either one
^^dope 8/10
we all know your name is an equation, that squiggle sign is really a minus
and you can add whack to the problem, because youre reppin emericas finest
^^lol 7/10
'once you go rap, you never go back'...just too bad you never got an invite
cause like your name, your rap future is a mirage that will never see light
^^ehh 5/10

Overall: 58/100 (58%)

Vote: Black~Magic

Thanx for voting homie...Uppin for more votes.....

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

checkin dem polls................. long verse kesse ...very long
upppppppiinnnn this battle

Voted For: Kesse

kesse took dis he came harder n his shit wasnt sloppy

openor-he came harder punch was aight
punches-kesse shit was a lil bit betta
personalz-none
multies-none
structure-kesse
closer- kesse took dis shit period

kesse came way harder den armada so he gets mah vote 4 dis

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^ Lmao...He wasnt battlin armada...he was battlin me...u didnt even read the battle did u? Sry Kesse, but this vote will be removed

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Ya squad is weak, I'll rip you apart with speech
Watch this gay chump, get "raked up" like "autumn leaves"
6...nice opener, gud meta!!
Don't start with me, you garbage dude!
Ya flow is rookie, now watch me "expose this pussy" like "prostitutes" *
5...not feelin it. structure is off and 1st line is filler!!
It aint a fable you wack kid, I'll leave you unable to back-bend
After I'm thru clappin "shots at ya dish" like "cable assasins" **
6...nice line....clever and no need to explain!!
You'll get destroyed, Black~Magik is hot, this faggot is not
So I'll put this "jack in a box" like a "childrens toy" ***
4...meh, i get how u tryin to rhyme but it aint workin still!!
Aint Nobody matchin me, especially this actress queen
face it, ya flows couldn't "bounce back" with "matress springs"
7...funny. best line so far!!
I'll attack his spleen, cock and bust, let the shots erupt
And leave his whole body with "no lid" like "topless cups"
6...another gud meta...sum nice shit!!
When I'm 'squeezin the tech', I'm easily bringing 'heat to ya chest'
Plus I'll "shove my nikes up your ass" just to "keep it in check" ****
7...hot line!! that nike shit was nice!!
I'm Godly ho, stay "packin heat" like "Dominoes" *****
Damn dawg, all I need is a "tampon" to "stop your flow" ******
8...LMFAO!! i love the 2nd line!! funny shit! tampon lines are funny!!
You're thru if you try me, look dawg, you losing is likely
And please, you couldn't "Be G" if you were that "group from the nineties" *******
6...gud line...Beegees shit cud've been done better!!
Show respect to the guy, and if you question that I'm the best when I rhyme
Look dawg, you got shit "fucked up" like "sex in the sky!"
7...gud closer, a lot of nice metas in ya verse!!

OVERALL: 62/100 (62%)

fusion of color and witchcraft, you having a whack name is my only conclusion
'hip-hop's theme music'??? oh i get it, that must be part of the illusion
6...funny opener, nice play on his name!!
a delusion? you can think whatever you want when my punches go through you
no confusion, you wont be winning this battle just cause your into voodoo
4...this line was weak man, Kesse ya better than this!!
cause your not impressive at all...actually your skills are quite tragic
you aint putting on any show, cause B............... you just lack magic
7...hot 2nd line, gud play on his name again!!
fact is, the way he stiffens men.... you could call him the human starch
cause only time hes droppin anythin golden, is if hes on top of the arch
6...clever bar, sum gud shit!!
st.louis kid has skill? things must look different from a bird's eye view
how bout i ram this loss down your throat, and you can sing RV the blues
6...nice line again!!
what are you gunna do....stir up a potion with bat ears or warts of a toad
cause the only time your rhymes ever sound any good......are in morse code
6...ok line, but that morse code shit wasn't done that well!
pms me asking for a 'challenge', so i know you musta prewritten your lines
i should be fine, cause for you its a challenge just to write decent rhymes
4...GAY! GAY! I hate pre-writ lines!! NO!!
youll never hit any primes, always be some punk ass teen who just drops for fun
funny how your interests are rap and pussy....you aint familiar with either one
8...LMAO!!! funny shit!!
we all know your name is an equation, that squiggle sign is really a minus
and you can add whack to the problem, because youre reppin emericas finest
7...nice personals in there!!
'once you go rap, you never go back'...just too bad you never got an invite
cause like your name, your rap future is a mirage that will never see light
6...ok closer!! not a bad verse!!

OVERALL: 60/100 (60%)

a real close battle................
both came with the punches all hittin relatively hard, some extra and funny!! what lost Kesse the battle was that one weak line he dropped and then that GAY ASS pre-writ line cuz i realy do not like them!!! black came with some mad metas and shit and overall it won him the battle!!

V/ - Black Magik

rtf hoez!!! links in my siggy!!

word, yeah......i couldn't think of anythin else...plus, yeah, new kids vote is crack, whatever, its coo/black, you still want in my crew, or are you leavin for a while?

yeah I still want it...but I wont be that active for a lil bit, so dont add me to the roster yet

word, just get at me whenever you're ready, yo....