RapVerse.com Community - Esco vs J DOT

Voted For: J DOT

How u the king of sac-town, when i claimed it before i Moved
your a wannabe Buck.Shot, When I NOK'D u out it was Proved
^Not really much of a punchline. Why would you knocking him out make him a wannabe buck.shot? So he could knock himself out? Lol, weird ass punch...
Livin Legend? Please, thats funny as a Dave Chappelle Show
Establishment kicked you out...cause DQ Is already they Ho!
^Not very good... I guess it called him a hoe but nothing special.
no disrepect ta Her, because frankly, your more of a Vagina
Your a Thug? HA! Your cap-gun talk only appeal to a Minor
^I'm pretty sure you're a minor. But its all good. I guess he does talk about thuggish stuff. I dislike that but an okay punch.
i'll define-ya with my Verse, an reveal your RapVerse Status
faggot only appeals ta old men in panties...like Trish Stratus!
^I feel like you're trying to be funny in your verse and its not really working. Weak punch.
u really think your flow Matters? even Tony Green has Pitty
''suck'' so much ya bitch lips stay on your Moms left Titty!
^Also wack. I;ve seen alot better from you.
u can sit an say i'm not witty, an that u think am whack...
But you fail ta mention the time ya asked me ta Teach u Rap
^Good personal. Probably the bets punch of yours.
askin ta drop a verse an make your open mics worth feed
everythin you ever dropped only NOK Would sit an Read...
^Alright also.. Not really true though.
god help if u ever had a seed, unless its from a Test Tube
ya rhymes aint ''shit''' even after u greased em up with Lube!
^Yeah.... Gay.
i'm feelin like Ice cube, cause i know ''today is a good day''
................................all i gotta do is use ''Dots'' ta end J!
^Actually this was your bets line in my opinion. Good closer

Overall your verse was kinda wack. I;ve seen alot better from you. I would enjoy to see multis. And it seems also you were going in a different direction than your usual battles and it wasn't working out. No hate.

Esco kinda femine, changed cause his name said ‘LAYDE’(lady)
You’re a lame, just admit. Beating DOT’s not even a maybe,
^Self glorifying but effective. I liked it...
You a female ass nigga, Watch how DOT turf cats
Ran up on you, robbed you, then gave you yo purse back
^haha, funny... made me laugh
Look kid, being tha best is way outta ya dreams
You a ‘femcee’, that’s why I kicked you outta Nok Out ‘Kingz’*
^funny too... but the whole woman thing is getting kinda played at this point.
Lie all you want. Don’t matter… I know the truth
I hate niggas who bitch a lot cause they team getting boo’d*
^Hmmm... Wack.
And fuck tha team you with now, cause you da wackest nigga in
Say you not?...Look at yo record, I’m not convinced
^funny too... very witty and clever
I can take this shit soft, cause I don’t care how you spit
You couldn’t be ‘topping’ Dot if yo first name was ‘whipped’*
^Dopeness, I really like that line, probably one of your best in this battle.
Talk loud if you want? That’s tha more times ima ace ya
U don’t know ‘cutting edge’, youngsters can’t play wit ‘razors’
^Also good... Liked it lots.
Got tazors to calm you down and give you a colgate smile
…Got lasers to box you in like a piece of tile
^Wack. Bascially could have done without that line.
We can be in tha same crew….LS, and I’d still hafto kill ya
Cause real recognize real and you don’t look ‘familiar’*
^Dooope. I really like that line.

Overall you're verse was decent. Not the best but what won this for you was the humor. Your verse was able to make me laugh and thats alot of what I look for. And the wordplay within your verse was dope too. Votes goes to JDot...