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13th. 04-25-05 02:27 PM

Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…
As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)
TITE FEW LINES......
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…
GOOD....
^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…
LOL
Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…
SWEET......
Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…
LOL
=9/10 A REALLY TITE VERSE 1 OF DA BEST IVE SEEN SUM REALLY GOOD PUNCHES IN THERE

VS

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
OK......
His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
SO-SO......
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
NOT GOOD.....NOT EVEN A PUNCH....
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
OK.......
You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
OK BUT YA STRUCTURE IS OFF......
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L
OK........
= 7/10 AN OK VERSE, NOT REALLY MANY GOOD OR HARD PUNCHES!!!!!

V/SOLO

King Solo 04-25-05 02:32 PM

^^^^not a registered voter...............DAMN!!!!

oh well uppin this ish

Ill-Grammatix 04-25-05 03:47 PM

Voted For: SoLo

one-sided victory here.... this was way too easy to judge...lol



I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"

ok...no real punch to it.....ahead of me lines are unoriginal

His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML

lol....funny... a lot of kats won't get the connection... good line

This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!

bahhhh....filler line

If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"

boooo....real mediocre-like

You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines

prolly the best line in ya verse.... play on his writing style has been done before though

This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L

didn't reallly like ya closer.... the whole forget about u... and the play on ya name has been done by everyone in RV.... bored with it.... verse wasn't too original... lotta played concepts and wild punches that never connected




Battle Solo And Finally Ya Flowin Sumthin The Way I Got Ya Ass Sweatin…
Bad Boy 4 Life Huh!?!?
Ain’t U The Guy Who Couldn’t Show On RV Cuz His Mom Wouldn’t Let Him…

ouch!!!! good opener and personal....didn't even have to look at the link

As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…(cheater)

decent line here.. no real punch but looks like a pretty good set-up for what's to come

The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…

another personal.. and the hits keep coming

^^U Remember..Ironic That It Was The Police Mike & Marcus Gettin 5-0’ed…
Want Me 1-on-1 Hopin To Get My Dick..Mike Knows I’m Known To Ride Hoez…

didn't like how it ended but the 5-0'ed line was hot

Leave Ya Bloody, I Ain’t Got A Scratch..Its Clear Who Is Doin The Most Fightin…
Fight Me! I Killed This Dude Already..Now Ya Know Why He’s Been Ghost Writin…

good play on crew name...lol....a lil stretched but a nice punch

Face It Ya Wack.. Mike U Suck More Than When Ya Got A Dick In Ya Mouth…
Ya Loss Has Been Scripted..Now I’ll Execute It With Just A Click Of My Mouse…

ehhh... closer not too strong but decent... coulda been worded better for more effect

N.Tavarez 04-25-05 06:35 PM

This was feedback posted for SoLo
 
checking polls......................................

....Gone.... 04-25-05 07:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Mike Lowery
 
I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
^^ Lol i figured this bar out, nice wordplay with a punch also a personal.


His rhymes are all fake, but... if you knew him well...
You wouldn't be suprised, I mean, his Queen is DML
^^Ha, dml posted fake pics, i get it now, nice punch


This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
^^ Good nice punch w/a personal


If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"
^^ Meh ok punch.



You never spit hard, you spit it soft, I'll snap your spine
And Your Verse Has More Ups And Downs, Than The Way You Cap Your Lines
This battle gonna end, jus like my name, if you can spell
Cuz.........SP.................................... ..U get the L

^^ Aiight i liked the personal punch on the closer.



Overall=Good punches mike, your flow was off a little. The personals and the punches were connecting, and they're were hitting hard.


Decension-I liked this battle, both had good punches w/ personals, so i guess the punches and the personals is a tie for both heads. Wordplays from Solo were harder, mike your wordplays was good, but it wasn't harder than solo so although i can't vote, i'mma put down as a feedback.....G-luck in the polls solo.

L.I.3 04-25-05 07:23 PM

Voted For: Mike Lowery

I'ma merk this Englishmen, and take the win, wit bleepin' rhymes
Cuz the only time he ahead of me, is when we speakin' "time"
This kid's a "criminal", and I ain't talkin' about his spittin'
Cuz he hasn't seen a "solid bar"... since he was in prison!
If theres a place for losers, man, you'd be ringing on the bell
Cuz you kno what is comin', so you capitalized the "L"

Vs.

As An Unborn Child U Were Feelin Me..I Used To Take Ya Mom And Beat Her…
Now We Years Ahead..I’m A Big Game Hunter About To Murder This Cheetah…
The Bad Boyz…Bitch On Ya Own Ya Just One Half Of A Duet Of Fake Vets…
Ride Together..Die Together!! Correct Cuz Ya Got Killed By Me & Lay-Text…

Well both had their ups and downs. SPuL's opener was the only realy nice bar of the battle. The rest was okay i guess. But on RV you dont find good shit. SoLo came with personals but some wording was off and didnt deliver well. SPuL's opener was ill. It had me rolling. Yo spul dont do those SPUL punches...really played lol. SoLo come to RB and battle me. I will merk yah. ;) Anyways. SPuL had more quotables and the best punch of the battle. That got him the win. Peace

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-25-05 08:21 PM

Voted For: Mike Lowery

solo-good drop, kinda elementary though ,i mean you disses werre kinda kidish,not a very strong verse
butb i did like the cheetah line, was ko,but you shouldve
built up that punch more, alot of filler in ya verse fam, overall it was average....shouldve tried more........
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lowery-lol, hey spul, you came with personals as usual, shit wsnt great but it was deffinately more creative then the 1st verse, you didnt have much in ya verse but old peeps would get ya punches, queen dml, was perdy good, ya verse was simple in all,....
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overall i gotta go wit spul jus cuz his verse was a liil more personal n his punches were jus a lil more creative,...both drops were decent but lowery pulled it off wit better wit.
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you delete this vote like troop n ill neva vote on ya ish again........pz

King Solo 04-25-05 10:51 PM

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King Solo 04-26-05 02:20 PM

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King Solo 04-26-05 08:09 PM

fuckin hump ma'fuckaz.................quit sleepin

King Solo 04-27-05 12:22 PM

still bumpin this shit...............................

King Solo 04-27-05 07:16 PM

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King Solo 04-28-05 11:08 AM

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King Solo 04-28-05 03:17 PM

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gunit101. 04-28-05 09:34 PM

This was seriously incredibly fucking horrible. Still using links? Just stop trying, please.


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